Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/15/06 12:14
Chapter: Chapter 5 - On being 'Okay'
Marlene is a pain. In fact she'd be Godawful if it wasn't for that one line "Making sure you're OK is guy's talk etc ". Back to business...
Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/15/06 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Feasting
Marlene stinks! James is fan-tastic & Lily is, well, Lily. But I get what you mean about the Sorting Song , not in the same class as the rest.
Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/15/06 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 3 - 'One'
Sorry, can,t stop to chat, I'm reading this simply spellbindind fanfic ....
Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/15/06 11:42
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Angel on a broomstick
I hated it at first. I mean , the bubble burst while I was still smiling over Chapter 1 . Till James flew in. You have one hell of a terrific imagination.
Reviewer: lovelilyjames
Date: 09/15/06 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Letter
This chapter was really , really, really fun to read ! Your Lily James fanfics are the best ever, I'm breaking my own rule & reading an incomplete one 'cause I couldn't resist after your other two. (I'm sure I'll pay when I'm left begging for updates.)This is just so terrrific.Go on with good work.One more compliment - you're so exactly / perfectly spot on with ALL the characters - Lily, James, Sirius, Remus . And the charmed letteris one hell of a brilliant idea!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 09/10/06 10:41
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
hehe!
when i was reading this i was thinking, omg, thats like the notebook, which is like, the sweetest movie in the word and im in love with it!!
so, yay!
why haven't you updated in , like, forever, this is one of my fave stories...:(
please please please update!
PlEaSe!!
:):):)
Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 09/09/06 3:42
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
I loved this AND the Notebook! But shouldn't there be a part AFTER this last chapter where she finally says 'James, I love you!' if there's not its okay but i personally find those scenes nice
Reviewer: wildmagic
Date: 09/01/06 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
i love it i love it i love it i feel so bad for james i love lily but her emotions are screwed and she doesnt know anything
i hate marlene shes evil and twisted !!
cant wait for more i really hope you write more really soon
Reviewer: KnuckleHead6270
Date: 08/17/06 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
AWESOME!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!! PLEASE KEEP WRITEING!!!!
Reviewer: hogwartsgirlhg
Date: 08/08/06 12:53
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
i loved it
Reviewer: catalina792
Date: 08/03/06 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
omgggggggggg! update *gasp* need *gasp* update *passes out* you're brilliant!!!!
Reviewer: hpfreak94
Date: 07/28/06 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
Please add chapter soon
Reviewer: hpfreak94
Date: 07/28/06 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
Please add chapter soon
Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 07/28/06 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
I LOVED this! The fighting and passion was just right, and you have Lily's uncertainty and James' feelings spot on! Great job!
Reviewer: hpfan4eva
Date: 07/28/06 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Letter
real nice beginning
Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 07/27/06 8:51
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
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in case you're wondering, i did just copy-paste all of that
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 07/24/06 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
ok
im a little confused
you see im wondering where the paragraph in the summary comes in
cuz i thought it was brilliant!
=]
Author's Response: Ah, that's something I planned out at the beginning. But I haven't gotten there yet. Heh.
Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 07/20/06 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 3 - 'One'
The chapter was great, but the best part was the notes about Vacation Packages and Vacation Portkeys : )
Reviewer: LilyPotter
Date: 07/20/06 14:24
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Letter
I absolutely love your witing style : )
It kinda makes me want to go re-write my stories before I embarass myself...lol
Reviewer: Lily_Flower_Evans
Date: 07/17/06 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 3 - 'One'
Will Chloish plese update? You're driving me insane here
