this is so emotional, i love stories from Ginny's PoV, as she's a very emotional person and very unpredictable. i really liked this.
GAH. I'm crying so much! No piece of Harry Potter related fan fiction has EVER made me shed one tear, but you, you totally changed it all.
It's pure emotion, your writing aren't words, they're emotions on paper. Emotions you have written so we can experience them as well.
I just found your stories, if this one is any indication I am going to be reading them all. OUtstanding
I loved that! I adore anything sad, so I thought that was amazing. I wascrying all through it. I love how you portrayed Ginny's feelings. I think that you captured her character perfectly. I love how she had to see for herself what was going to happen, because that really seems like something that Ginny would do. You wrote emotions and descriptions very well. I've read a few of your other stories, and I think that they are all wonderful. You are great at writing sad stories. Keep up the good work!
~ lily_evans34 aka mrs_tom_riddle
This was an amazing one-shot. The emotions conveyed in it were immensely powerful. The opening line (I remember the way it looked, the way it felt, the way it changed my life forever.) was very strong and very appelaing. It drew me right into the middle of the story and already dreading what was about to come. I felt very sorry for Ginny and symphatized with her greatly. The joy, the hope she feels at the beginning of the story is so suddenly crushed and though I knew what was coming I felt my heart break alongside hers. Her despair was so real, so painfully recognizable. Another womderfull aspect of your story was teh fact that she witnessed his ending in a way. It made sense and it also added to the intense feeling of the story. What pained me the most though was that he did not know that she was carrying his child, that he was going to be a father. And Elizabeth was just to sweet for words. I am glad that Ginny was left with at least a little bit of him and has something to live for. Well done! I loved it!
Author's Response: Wow...thank you is all I can say. I am beyond happy that you enjoyed the story as much as you did. Ahhh, thank you again!
Oh soo well written! I love searching for future fics and this one was awesome! its nice to think that things could've turned out differently.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Wow this is great story! Really well written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was unsure of how people would respond to it, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :)