Reviews For It Was Always You
Reviewer: witchwriter113
Date: 06/18/06 13:36
Chapter: Paradise, almost

its not boring

its humorous!

a great start!!

Seriously though, I luved it

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 05/02/06 15:21
Chapter: The Journey Home


Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 05/02/06 15:21
Chapter: The Journey Home


Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/04/05 5:18
Chapter: The Journey Home

Thinking about punishing Snape makes me happy!...... Oh did I say that out loud? Oh well. Great chapter! I love it when Lily starts to realise that James isn't such a sh*t head after all.

Reviewer: raspberry0981
Date: 08/11/05 23:08
Chapter: The Journey Home

Really good story! It's exactly how I thought James and Lily's relationship was in the beginning. Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you very much:)

Reviewer: Winky the house elf
Date: 08/11/05 18:37
Chapter: The Journey Home

Hey that was great!!I read that you spoke french so I will post you my review to see if you're good. J'ai adore ton histoire! Sa commence bien. J'adore les Lily/James fanfics alors continue ton beau travail!! E-mail me I want to know if you figure out what my review said and Update soon please!!!I give you a big 10 for your fantastic story!!

Author's Response: is my translation: I loved your story! It starts well. I love Lily/James fanfics so keep doing your lovely work!...pretty precise i believe. Good job on speaking french! A second language always comes in handy, espicially when you're talking with your friend and you dont want other people to understand what you guys are talking about lol, personal experience. Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: JuSt_LiKe_LiLy_E
Date: 08/11/05 10:40
Chapter: The Journey Home

i thought your story was great! i especially liked the part where she was hoping snape would 'die in his sleep.' I thought was funny! anyway update! =)

Author's Response: haha, yes i always chuckle to myself when i read that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 05/09/05 16:21
Chapter: Paradise, almost

lol, i dont think badley of u because of ur typing sure it was the darned keyboards fault anyways! *cough*=) And about the R/H thing, it didnt bother me at all, im a R/H shipper too! *sigh*

Reviewer: Burrowbrat
Date: 05/02/05 14:33
Chapter: The Journey Home

Wow, this is the first Lily/James story i've read...I didn't really know what to expect but it was really good. There were a few places where Lily and James reminded me of Hermione and Ron. Odd...maybe it's just my one-track mind that couldn't let go of that thought...oh well, i digress...good job. More please =)

Author's Response: really?I never noticed. I didnt mean for it to be like that if it is. I hope its not in a bad way. Im a ron/hermione shipper, so it wouldnt be all that bad, but just not the way i had planned it. thank for the review:)

Author's Response: wow, im amazed at my grammar lol. More so typing skills.. I mean "thanks" not "thank". Im sure you could have guessed, but i just wanted to show im not totally dumb lol.

Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 04/12/05 18:30
Chapter: The Journey Home

~10~ grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ... i always hated snape. too bad i feel like controling my temper and horrible mouth, otherwise this review wouldnt be here because the computer would be outside smashed to bits because Snape sucks, and there would be a lot more language on here! anyway, i'm waiting for another update. ~stares determinedly at computer screen~

Author's Response: yes, snape is an evil git. Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 03/27/05 19:27
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

~wide eyed~ wow! that was good. Shay's funny ... a bit like me ...

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, i love shay too. She is probably my favorite creation. She is based on me in some aspects. Her hair, eyes, personality and some of her emotional issues (which you'll see in later chapters) are based on me. But i think alot of people can relate to Shay because she is supposed to be a very charasmatic person. We'll see more of her in later chapters and you'll get more depth into her life. Also, Lindsay is going to be coming out of her shell more. You'll see her becoming a more forceful person in some departments (think Remus Lupin...) But keep in mind the third chapter still has to get thank for the review:)

Reviewer: irishphoenix
Date: 03/27/05 19:19
Chapter: Paradise, almost

NOT TERRIBLE! NOT BORING!!!! on the cortrary: very good and very interesting. i am addicted to James/Lily fics, and it'll be interesting to see your take on their relationship.

Author's Response: aww thank you!:)Ya, im addicted too, but better that then drugs lol. I hope the third chapter gets up soon...11 days in queue and counting!!thank for the review!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 03/21/05 17:02
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

okay, i'm not going to waste your time because you need to get that third chappie in....but....K, really really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):)

Author's Response: omg i know!i've submitted it, but yeah, i havent gotten any emails yet. It's been like 6 days i think!tic, toc, tic, toc... Thanks for the first review:)very nice. But i must say, these chapters are boring in my opinion compared to the third..i love the third right now. I just want it up!!!cross your fingers!!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 03/21/05 16:54
Chapter: Paradise, almost

this is soooooooooooo NOT terrible OR boring! so get those thoughts out of your mind so you can write another chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):):) :):):):):)

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 03/21/05 5:15
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

i've reviewed this b4, but i'm reviewing again. i want to add a comment to the person who was talking about the POVs thing. i actually like it how you kinda switched the points of view. i'm writing a story from 1 girl's pov and i know how hard it could be to keep it just that one persons mind. well, oopdate pweez! lol

Reviewer: Siri_luver
Date: 03/19/05 9:43
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

you know what, i always hate it! why does lily always deny that she likes him!? it's actually getting annoying now...but not to say that i don't like your story! because i do! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: ya i know! i agree. Im gonna make my story a bit different, just to beat the norm lol. Keep checking back for chapter 3!!:)

Reviewer: harry potter is my life
Date: 03/19/05 9:27
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

yay! really cute story! i love james... he is my altime favorite character! you portray everyone in this story really well and exactly how i thought they would be. your story is really good and congrats on your first one! : D

Reviewer: chloish
Date: 03/11/05 15:21
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

Hello. :) I read this a while ago, but I have just now gotten a chance to review. This is very good so far! The only thing I can really think of on the constructive critisism mode is that your point of view (third person omnicient, yes?) can be a little confusing in some areas. Just because, really, when you have several people's thoughts (ie Lily, James, Shay) right after one another, it can be kind of confusing. But it's a great story so far! I liked it a lot. :) Tehe, Shay will use her wonderful persuasion to convince Lily of her love for the fabulous James Potter. *dances* :)

Author's Response: ahaha yes dance the night away! thank you for being my beta!:)*gives thumbs up* yes, i need to work on my POV i think..maybe just be more clear..hmm we shall see...

Reviewer: fvweasley
Date: 02/14/05 7:52
Chapter: Paradise, almost

This is so poignant if you consider what happens to them later! Love the interaction between James and Sirius, it's exactly how imagined it would be!

Reviewer: choscorneredkiss
Date: 01/17/05 13:45
Chapter: a surprise rendez-vous

hurry up with that update! im gonna cry!!! shes fallen for him!! omg! anyway, email me and we can get together maybe, cb....

Author's Response: sorry!im trying to update but my 3rd chapter has been rejected twice now!!and as most ppl know, exams are now and i actually have to do good!lol, but i promise i'll have it up as soon as i can!thank you to all readers and reviewers!

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