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Name: Thrash Unreal (Signed) · Date: 03/13/08 11:27 · For: One-Shot
That was very touching, almost made me cry - very well written!
Keep writing! x


Name: Pissenoffanis (Anonymous) · Date: 12/01/07 23:55 · For: One-Shot
Wow... reading that fic brought tears to my eyes. You've captured Ginny's emtions so well, and now I have a better understanding of why people spiral down into depression and self hatred. It was very touching to see how supportive and loving all her friends and family were.


Name: emLILY EVANS (Signed) · Date: 05/26/07 19:16 · For: One-Shot
soooooooooo goooooooooood


Name: Hedwig with a quill (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 12:06 · For: One-Shot
YES!!!! I soo can relate to Ginny!!


Name: XxFallenAngelxX (Signed) · Date: 03/18/07 21:01 · For: One-Shot
I LOVE this story so much. It's so good. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece that I can really relate to.


Name: 180goddess hotline (Signed) · Date: 03/17/07 19:05 · For: One-Shot
love and diamonds baby, love and diamonds. . .


Name: Sick_Angel (Signed) · Date: 12/19/06 6:24 · For: One-Shot
OMG I never cried so hard in my life! *sobs histerically*


Name: Stickeynoteninja (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 12:37 · For: One-Shot
It's gorgeous and powerful. The imagry you used was simply beautiful. I have rarely seen a dark and angsty story where the characters were kept in-character and cannon. You did a wonderful job of that. I applaud you, darlin'.


Name: Stickeynoteninja (Signed) · Date: 11/22/06 12:36 · For: One-Shot
It's gorgeous and powerful. The imagry you used was simply beautiful. I have rarely seen a dark and angsty story where the characters were kept in-character and cannon. You did a wonderful job of that. I applaud you, darlin'.


Name: Cleo316 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/06 11:14 · For: One-Shot
That was a very well done story.
^_^
And I like how you put " God " at the end , instead of " Gods " like so many authors do.
I'm a Christian , so thats very important to me.
^^


Name: twistedtinkerbell (Signed) · Date: 07/28/06 11:21 · For: One-Shot
so deep that was bloody brill!


Name: some_kinda_superstar (Signed) · Date: 07/19/06 4:20 · For: One-Shot
fantastic! i was hooked from the first paragraph. trust me, i really know what it's like to feel that way, and to do that to yourself. as i don't believe in god, the ending sort of spoiled it a little for me, but aside from that i loved it!


Name: Valentinia (Signed) · Date: 07/15/06 19:16 · For: One-Shot
Usually I don't really go for Angsty!Ginny, as I find that it's a bit over-used and can get very cliché. Therefore I must say it takes guts to attempt to write her. This story was very original, though.

I really enjoyed how Ginny's feelings are made so clear by what she says about the sun, the wind, the moon. It also ties together nicely in the end when she reflects on them again, and sees them in an entirely different light.

I think you portrayed all the characters very well, too. It's especially good how Ginny blames herself for not being like them, naming the good qualities she wishes she had, and then, when her friends come, it's those qualities that she was hurting herself over that essentially save her.

The imagery that is used is slightly disturbing (definately not in a bad way, though), and described quite well, though I'd have liked to have seen just a bit more description (even though the fic is mostly focused on emotion, which you portrayed very well).

I really liked the "Slice" part, since it was a straightforward, believable reason for why Ginny was doing what she was doing.

It's also very good that she wasn't completely healed in the end (that would have been way too fast) but that the reader knows she is healing.

All in all, this is a great one-shot.



Name: xostupidcupidox (Signed) · Date: 07/07/06 15:28 · For: One-Shot
Wow, that was very, very.... there's no word to describe how well written and touching this is, and I sound corny so I'll just stop right now. ;)


Name: I_Luv_Draco4ever (Signed) · Date: 05/27/06 18:28 · For: One-Shot
I was so near tears! This story gave me strength in a hard time, so thank you.


Name: 180goddess hotline (Signed) · Date: 05/20/06 14:04 · For: One-Shot
that was beautiful, it made me cry( thats a good thing)


Name: Ginny Weasley 12 (Signed) · Date: 04/29/06 22:39 · For: One-Shot
That was amazing. I wish I could get emotions down on the page half as well as you can. Keep writing.


Name: Ginny Weasley 12 (Signed) · Date: 04/29/06 21:50 · For: One-Shot
That was amazing. I wish I could get emotions down on the page half as well as you can. Keep writing.


Name: fob123 (Signed) · Date: 04/16/06 23:48 · For: One-Shot
this is a very good perspective on a ''cutters point of view''. people need to understand where they come from.


Name: angellex (Signed) · Date: 04/16/06 21:31 · For: One-Shot
It started out really dark then got light. I love that in a fic. Great job!!


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