Loved the Cho scenes.
Typical Harry. Push her down the stairs. Loved the Sirius part
Hilarius. Harry about Ginny
I think you did the owl results well.
Love the ending
Loved the Howler
I love your story so much!!! THis is the second time I have read it and I wanted to get to the next chapter so fast that i didnt have time to review. You are so brilliant and this is exactly how i wished JKR would have done the real series. I am off to begin your sequel AGAIN! Thanks for the amazing read.
exceptionally awesome tale...you should be so proud of your accomplishments....can't wait to read the sequel...
Oh, no, Harry and Ron have been kidnapped! Remember Ron saying" Sometimes, you act like you think we’re going to be abducted right out of the castle or something"? Well, it turned out true.
"Sometimes, you act like you think we’re going to be abducted right out of the castle or something."
Ha, ha, Ron certainly knows how to predict the future.
You have succeeded in making me cry. Good job!
I really enjoyed your portrayal of Mrs. Weasley in this chapter.
Good first chapter!
I love how Harry smirks at the end, he's getting his character back! Yay!