haha i reallyt loved this spetially the howler
i love this story it's making me cry so far but i love it anyway and let me tell you it is such a great calmer spetially when finals are right around the corner that means tomorrow in my case
mwahahahaha!i hate bellatrix.
i love that bit when madam pomfrey is like, "i could fix that"i just laughed.maybe it's just my sense of humour...
o.m.g. thats all i have to say. and also poor poor poor poor poor poor harry!!!!!
oooohhhhhh....the plot thickens...muahaha!
awwwww...great story i love it!
oooohhh! the fireworks begin! great story!
Excellent story Mel, I was hoping Draco would get the elbow off this mortal plane, and I'm glad it was either Ron or Neville! I think your writing style is very good, obviously based on JKR, but with enough individual quirks to make it your own. It was good to read a plot that was out of canon with book 6, but held it's own instead of being a poor excuse. I'm also well chuffed you wrote a sequel, I'm just going to read it now!
Sorry, this is only me first review of your story. I'll leave a proper one once I'm finished, but the end to this chapter is awesome, good effort.
OMG!!!!! that was such a good storey one of the absolute best i have read. i cant beleive that you managed to write it and look aftrer 3 kids. i can not wait to read the sequel!!!
very good like all tha details
I'd like to bloody kill Harry for making Mrs. Weasley cry. I don't care if she loves him like a son. Ginny's right, he has no right.
i always wondered... if the ministery can detect the magicbeing used and where it comes from why cant they send some wizard to the place where the unfrgivables might be used? it seems like jkr set herself up on that one(sorry no offense meant by that at all) booooooooooooooooooooo mistery of magic!!!!!!
oh whoops sorry
ok, iget what youresaying then if jkr said he was a chaser but... What about tht scence with him playing with the snitch in HP and the OotP. Thats a little strange. But i lved the scence with themarguing over the grill. it makesme think of muggle guys arguing over how to cook lol! nice chapter i think this is my next to favorite.
Excellent story! I have been reading this for the last 3 days and am extremely impressed with how it turned out.
You know...I don't really remember seeing anymore of Harry's spontanious legilimens in HBP. *goes to read the book again*
My gosh! Hi I have been reading this story for a while now but I just signed up for the site a few moments ago. I love your story! Very talented indeed! If I was to rate this story so far I would give it a 9 out of 10!