WOW!!! I absolutly LOVED this- i loved the fact that you kept Harry's closed personality and nobilty like JK does. You can really show the emotion of all the characters yet never over do it! You make the reader empathise everything and have a great story line. You kept me up till the early hours of the morning and i will definatly be reading the sequal. The only reason i didn't review all the others was because i didn't want to pause the story plus I was recomemned to this by a friend so keep up the good work- KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!
Amazing story! It's kept me up until 2am most nights reading it, I just can't bring myself to switch my laptop off. I was slightly dissapointed that Dudley and Ron ended up yelling at each other at Christmas; it originally looked like Dudley might be starting to leave his parents and accept wizards. You must really hate the Dursley's to write them like that! I was completely shocked when Malfoy was killed. He's just always been there, being horrible but constant. Though, I thought it was clever to bring Zabini in with Crabbe and Goyle at the end. Thanks for the enjoyment, and I'm going off to read the sequel now!
ah... the emotions.
Nicely written...Come on Monny
Wormtail. Good fight scene
The Dursleys are back. This should get tense...I am glad you made James a Chaser. I always go with whatever JKR says... Later she again said chaser, but a reserve seeker... Hinze the Snitch in OOTP.
Loved the memories.
Busted....Ah underage drinking. Takes me back...But, then again I am 21 so not that far back...........nicely written
Legilimency!!!!!!!!!!!! Cho got burned...
Accio Ginny...Ron may not like how that could be used....Madam Pomfrey was funny
Yay. Harry and Ginny!!!!!!!!!!!!! Same was a jerk
That must be a very uncomfortable essay. A teacher should never do that.
seems very accurate
like the surges. ron and hermione hilarious!!!!
Harry and Ginny. Good scene at the top.