I really like Erin, she reminds me of myslef at times!
I like where it is going so far.
i cannot express how much i love this story ina review you amke it sound so real i have to read your other stories soon!
I loved the first chapter. I have never read a James/Lily story and now I know where to find some good ones. i love how go back and forth from James and Lily so much it keeps exciting and from getting boring! ; )
1-Sirius, Remus and if you asked who my hated JKR character was, Peter! the butt head traitor he is! really!
2-Erin, Leah, Ruby
4-to much to place in one or two, possibly three sitting(s)
5-Ethan, the git
6-no, i have not read that story, but i will soon
7-yes, and i loved them all
Must this story end? yes, actually, it says so right here! 'And Lily and James Potter died." well, that sort of butchers the whole 'happy ending' scenario, doesn't it?
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! so sweet! now, i'm going to stop reviewing in this super sexy review box and read the last and final chapie! wish me luck!
she loves him! she loves him! well, we all knew that! now, on to the next chapie!
love the story! now, the next chapter awaits!
that darn lily. and i don't like Ruby's mom, or mum. she is acting like an awful @%$! pardon my French.
stupid Ethan. stupid Lily.
love the fluff! and the bets! Hilarious!
i like this chapter a lot. it shows Lily's... uhh... unstable side. and i thought you said that Jenna is a Ravenclaw? how could she get into the Gryffindor common rooms and dormitories?
James! how could you give up on Lily? and James, WATCH OUT FOR BLUDGERS! YOU IDIOT!
“James Potter,” she screamed up. “We were made Head Boy and Head Girl due to our responsible actions. You do realize that we’re still responsible for these responsible actions!”
All she did know was that she was kissing James Potter smack on the lips in the middle of a hallways, throwing all her rules temporarily out of the window.
Bout time, if i do say so myself.
“Brutus,” Professor Binns called, pointing his finger at Sirius. “Wake up! You too, Granola.”
“Padfoot, wake up,” James nudged his friend.
“Was he talking to me?” Sirius slurred, his eyes half open.
“Yes,” Remus harshly whispered, embarrassed for his friend. Professor Binns looks quite angry. It seemed as though he had been neglected one time too many.
Ruby had stopped passing notes and was trying to wake Leah.
“Bower, sleeping in my class is unacceptable,” Professor Binns lectured, his ghostly eyes narrowed in frustration.
“The name is Black. Say it with me, Sirius Black,” Sirius commented.
“Whatever,” the ghost brushed off. “You will never pass your NEWT’s if you continually drone off in this class. What will you become without History of Magic, boy?”
“Minister?” Sirius offered.
“No!” Professor Binns shouted. “You’ll become some sort of criminal with that attitude.”
“Padfoot, a criminal. Nice one, Professor,” Peter chuckled.
“This is no laughing matter,” Professor Binns continued. “You too, Garnet. No more sleeping in my class. Classes are for learning.”
“Could you try teaching something a little more stimulating then?” Leah asked, clearly frustrated from being woken up.
“That’s what I’m talking about,” Sirius agreed.
“Detention! Glue and Barns, you’ll serve detention in the trophy room tonight at eight o’clock. No magic,” Professor Binns wailed.
With a slight shake, he resumed teaching the class.
“That senile living dead,” Leah grumbled. “I’ll be there for hours doing those trophies.”
“At least you have Sirius,” Erin pointed out. “He serves detention almost every night. Trophy room should be a usual thing for him.”
“Wow,” Leah whispered. “I’m paired with a pro.”
“That’s not something to be proud of,” Vita reminded her.
“When you have never done much Muggle housework in your life, it is!” Leah argued.
“Ladies!” Professor Binns yelled. “I am trying to teach.”
“You keep trying,” Leah muttered under her breath.
LOVE all of it!
“There I was,” he ignored her. “Standing in line, about to get sorted. My nerves were a mess, I know, hard to believe. The Sorting Hat was singing it’s song. Sirius was dancing along to it. I remember this because I was thinking, ‘Wow, he has no rhythm’. Anyways, as I was standing there, I saw that eye-catching hair of yours. Even at eleven, I knew you were something special. I felt a feeling that you were someone worth getting to know. Since then, I’ve just been drawn to you. It may have been the magic of the school, or even Sirius’ dancing. I tend to think it was the hair.”
HA HA! i love James!
“Love? You think love helped him go mental? I’m still thinking Evans did something. Those girls are conniving creatures,” Sirius proposed, all while getting ready to leave for his detention.
“The thumb-sucking, mama’s boy, lard of a human being, Pettigrew,” Sirius mumbled.
“You forgot bed-wetter,” James added.
“Lily Evans!” a voice screamed, followed by loud, dramatic footsteps and the pushing of people. “Out of my way, emergency.”
Ha ha! Funny!
“No, James. You’re not wasting your time,” she said easily. Although, this time, no one was there to hear her.
Awwwww, how sad... poor lily, poor james.
“Sirius Black just gave you, Lily Evans, the Head Girl of Hogwarts, advice?” Leah questioned, clearly in a state of shock.
“Sadly, I have sunk no lower. If Sirius Black thinks I’m demented, there must be something wrong with me,” Lily proclaimed, hopping into bed.
“Your hair looks really pretty today,” Leah cheerfully observed, throwing in porcupine quills without her knowledge.
“Really?” Erin asked. “I thought I’d try something new with it.” She proceeded to grab her ink bottle instead of the lemon juice in which was assigned.
“Is it supposed to be this color?” Leah asked, seeing the dark purple substance bubbling before them.
“That would make a really nice nail polish,” Erin muttered.
“Couldn’t have said it better myself,” Leah confessed.
“Those two are so distracted they barely know what class they’re in,” Ruby sighed under her breath.
“My mum wrote yesterday,” Erin went on. “She says that our cat got into my makeup. She’s going to send pictures.”
“That sounds absolutely adorable,” Leah gushed. “Your cat does the cutest things, unlike the toad in our garden.”
“You have a toad in your garden too?” Erin excitedly questioned. “That is such a coincidence.”
“In Divination yesterday, the crystal ball showed green. Do you think it has to do with our toads?” Leah wondered. She took the hair ribbon out of her hair and placed it in the mess of a potion.
I love this! it's totally like a movie/tv blond conversation!
“Gary, will you go to Hogsmeade with me?”
Lily Evans had officially dug herself in the deepest hole possible.
Nice going! next chapter here i come!