i could say i was surprised that they broke up after being so "perfect", but i would be lying. i was expecting this, especially because of how insecured lily seems to be in this fic. im liking the drama right now though. good work.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! sry! another long one! thanx for updating though. :):):)
Awww... everything was going so well in the chapter before this one. I still like this story a lot, it's cute! I hope better things happen next chapter!
damn that eathen...i want sexy sirius to kill him. can he plzzzzzzzz 0:) lol. it needs more sirius!!! lol everything does...UPDATE SOON!!
Okay, I'm kind of hating Lily right now....
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I LOVE this story!!! It is one of the best Lily/James stories I've read in a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time! I absolutely love it! I love the way that you incoorporated more than just lily not liking him, but it was more in depth than that- it really was any guy and he just happend to be the one she mostly took it out on. Please update quickly! And (i don't know if you are already planning to or not) but you are a great writer and i would stongly recommend you to keep writing! you are awesome!!!
Awwwwwww! This story is so cute. I love, love LOVE James! He is just a total sweetie pie. Doesn't he just seem like the perfect guy to be with? Sheesh, wonder why it took Lily so long to realize that. I mean, I understand with her father and all, but it was just so horrible to see -er, read James walk away with his head down, sad. I swear, this story got me bawling.. And funny thing is, when Lily told James that she liked him, and when James said (Not exact wording) "Want to know something funny?""I like you too." AAHhhhh! I swear, I was so happy yet I was crying like a baby! lol, this is such a good story! I can't wait for the next chapter and i will read your other storie that i have heard about on your reviews. Well, Like i have said I am totally lovin' this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! .... I have to give you a 6..... I'm just jesting with you. I actually gave you a nice clean 10! Enjoy! Dani
Hey, can't wait for the next update, great story, Lily and James r so cute!!! Can you check out my new story that just got accepted on this site? It's called Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets. It's nothing on yours, but... yeah! Keep up the good work!!!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! THEY R TOGETHER!!!!!!! I just love ALL of ur lily/james stories! I've read ALL 3 of them! *sniff* one of them is over *sniff* BUT NEW ONE'S COMMING YAY!!! UP DATE SOOOOON!!! 10!
aww!!so cute!but not too cute!:)update soon please!
I loveeee this fic.,.. please update soonnn very soon
Let's see, what to compliment about that chapter, hmm... that's a tough one. Great chapter, great writing, great story, great plot, great OC development. God!!! This story is awsome!!! I have a feeling there is going to be a fight or something bad in the next chapter, though. This one sort of set the tone for it. lol. Like I said, great chapter, love all yours stories and can't wait for the next update!
AWWWWW! That was such a cute chapter! Update Soon, :D
Good chapter ;)
You are awesome! I was just sitting on my computer waiting for something and you update! Thanks a lot! That was a great chappie. I like the bets and all. 10/10!
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! that was totally awsome...i could never write like that *sighs* oh well. it's ok as long as i still get to read it! oh, and i'd just like to comment on how wonderfully written that last part of the chapter was...lots of people can't do it right, so it sounds really bad, like they're rushing it or something, but you just do it perfectly! please please please don't end the story here! UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!
Very cute chapter. Write on! (okay, that sounds really corny, Umm...Love it!)
Yeah!! I'm first to review! it was really cute and i liked the end when lily was just smiling and thinking about how much she loved all her friends: that was really well written! can't wait for the next chapter!