very very very good! I really liked that chapter. It was very well written (as mostly everything you write is) but it was just really interesting to see how it affected them all. Update soon:)
Well I'm glad she regrets what she did. I just hope that the two of them find a way to get back together...GREAT CHAPPIE!!! I dunno if its just me, or if this chapter was slightly shorter than usual...maybe it's the Trail Mix Granola Bar I'm eating, who knows? PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!
Yeah! First reviewer. Somehow, though, that's not as comforting as it usually is... thanks to the chapter I was just forced to endure! WHY LILY WHY! Ok, you have to figure out what Ethan looks like and post a picture of him on your bio. Then, I shall download it to my computer, print out a full sheet of paper using his picture, and, using scissors, cut off his head! Muhaha!!! He will pay for being so increadibly selfish and mean and just... AGH! Loved how you wrote that chapter, it was just so sweet and innocent. That is, the way Lily and James just can't stop thinking about each other! A *ten*, as always. Update REALLY soon! They have to get back together!
... They will get back together. Durh
i think i'm hating you or ethan... huahua... sorry... please update soon...
I'm kinda hating you right now... I've reaad this story forever and this is my first review to you. I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! 10!
Aww that was sad, Lily sould really get over her fears and take a chance. anyway keep up the great work.
Stupid Ethan. -_- -Fwacks Ethan- The good thing is that there'll be more chapters. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
oh. this is so sad. i'm sad. lily is sad. james is sad. everybody is sad. i think something happy... really happy needs to happen. i
I love this story! I read it all in one sitting. Amazingly cute. Please update quick!
wow that was suprising...i really like this story, your doing a good job. keep sending the chappies in!
AHHH!!NO!! thats not supposed to happen! Oh Lily, why are you so insecure?! Damnit!Now they have to start all over again! Although, i dont totally blame Lily for not wanting to bring James home, it can be scary. But stupid ex boyfriend! Why does he have to meddle? Uhh!! Oh well, this was a good chapter still. Keep it up (you always do..lol) :D10
I will try to make this short by just summarizing what I would like to say......DIE EATHAN DIE! NOOO LILY...YOU RUN AFTER HIM RIGHT NOW! THINGS ARENT SUPPOSED TO END LIKE THIS! JAMES YOU CANT LEAVE HER! SHE LOVES YOU JAMES! I think that says it all... well great chapter! Update Soon!
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! *slaps myself* arg! *hits head against the wall repetedly saying "stupid" over and over again until my brain is officially dissolved* *sniff* WHY LILY!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor James...stupid Ethan...he's just JEALOUS!!! Can i appear in ur story and kill him? Please? a/w great chappie! thanks for the update! 10!
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! they can't break up! everything was so perfect!!!!!!! *tear* arrrrrrrrrr- ihope you get them back together! update quick!
This was quite good, and i don't hate you for it. i like the way ethan behaved. it'll show lily and james the way they truely feel about each other. Well done.
This might sound kinda strange but....YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This means it's definately going to be quite a few more chapters long-something that, despite the tragic and horrible(Ethan) events, is very, very good. So get updating.
Why?!That last chapter is killing off every single one of your reviewers! Poor James...He needs a hug.... *dies*
NOOOOOOO!!! That was EVIL!!! PURE EVIL!!! HOW COULD YOU?!?!?!? They were finally getting somewhere it their relationship and then you just made them breakup! I am going to murder Ethan!!! He will pay! Ok, I'm done ranting and raving. I actually do like the suspense folllowing breakups and the drama contained when James and Lily aren't actually "together." I am not forgiving you for what you did, by the way, just making the best out of a bad situation... lol. Update really really soon, I can't wait to find out what happenes next!