I like this chapter! Very nice and easy-going, great relationship establishment, the goods, man!
This is an improvement in their relationship. I read the next chapter in fanfiction.net, and I'm waiting for the next update!
I love that game...is that a bit childish? Anyway, I love the way you manage to stick to a firm plot line, but yet there are so many great details that really make it a pleasure to read! Keep it up!
Ooooh! They are just so... cute together! Great chapter! Update really soon. You know, I'm actually not mad at the fact they're not going out right now, it's almost better to start this way, I think. Love it! A ten!
awsome chapter as always! its better for their relationship that Lily and James are friends but then there is no action because everyone is happy with each other and nobody is going to be unpredictable. Maybe you could add a little action to spice things up eh? Great job! i look forward to the next chapter!!!!! :)
This is your best story!!!!!! I absolutely love Lily and James stories. I love how none of your stories are cliched. I also love how much L/J remind me of Harry/Hermione
ohh this is so sad...but the good thing is we know they're gonna get back together:) anyway really great story i love it!!
aww thats sad whydid that stupid ethan jerk have to screw things up.stupid cowardly people who can't say what they think but they have to end up to gether in the end but i want to see how you think they get there this is a great story please write more soon
Come on, you have to update now! You're on the SECOND page! AHHH!!! :):):( P.S. The sad face is because I'm still recovering from 'Catch My Fall'.
Author's Response: I still haven't written the chapter for this story yet. I apologize. As soon as I write it, I will post it. I haven't had time to write lately. Hopefully I will find some time this weekend.
omg this is soo sad ... i am soo mad at lilly right now .. oo and poor james !! :( but i have to admit this was an amazing chapter soo please update soon!! 10 10 10 !
Yeah Lily you hurt him real real bad! You..you...arrg! Wow that whole thing with Ruby was sad, wat a mean mum. Well anyways it was a good chapter so update soon!
I Hate Ethan!!!!!!!!!!! (they'll get together again soon, that is James and Lily will UPDATE THOUGH! (I'm on the edge of my seat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)
aww lils. its soo sad. y did u write this n make it happen? im sad now.
This is such good story! I reallllly hope that they get back together soon though!!!!! Perhaps she'll just like randomly go to Jame's house or something... they are just not meant to be separated!!(ahhhh!!)... heehee, anyhoo, I love this story!! Perfection... please, please update very, very soon!!!!
Ahhhh!! What was lily thinking?!! please update soon, and get them back together! Awesome chapter, you totally got me hooked on this story!
Poor James and Lily. At least she knows how much she hurt him. Update soon please. :):):)
Makes my heart pang everytime Lily says she hurt James. Poor James.
Good chapter it was very good written..And it was good to se how it had efekted all speciell Lily and JAmes.In moste storys you gets a little bit of next chapter ther you can read how angry and sad they are.I really dosen't like that so this chapter (storys) is the best I have read!
