Reviews For Vindicated
Reviewer: potter pearl
Date: 08/11/05 11:49
Chapter: Guarded Heart

awww!!! i love it!! your storys are soo good! this ones definatly one of my favorites!!

Reviewer: Rachel 05
Date: 07/31/05 14:27
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1. Erm, loved all three of them. Also I liked the bit where the teachers were talking about James and Lily. Sweet 2. Erm, I loved Erin Leah Ruby and Vita. Can't pick one. :p 3. I don't really have one. Maybe 19 though. I love this fic coz everyone is friends and is happy and in love (exactly the opposite of my life :( )and chapter 19 is just the best example of this. 4. Don't have time sorry :( Gotta go out in a min. 5. Ethan! No question about it! 6. No. Never heard of it sorry :p 7. Yes! Omg I love u to bits for writing them! I love J/L fics, and yours are amazing! 10/10!

Reviewer: potterfan62442
Date: 07/30/05 8:11
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1- Sirius, you can never resist his unique charm. 2- Erin, Ruby, Vita, and Leah. How can I not like everyone of them. 3- Chapter nineteen. I loved that chapter. I expeacially loved how Sirius, Leah, and Erin found them snogging in the broom cupboard. 4- "Mother of pearl!" Sirius screamed as he saw what was inside. He slammed the door shut quickly, his eyes wide and surprised. A huge grin broke out on his face before he erupted in a sing song voice. "Evans was snogging!" 5- Mrs. Wallace- she was not very nice at all. 6- no I have not read it. 7-Yes! They're great stories! I loved Potter's Charm. Sirius is my all time favorite charactor in that one. Your a great writter. Thanks for giving me something good to read. -potterfan62442

Reviewer: mlstr
Date: 07/09/05 17:52
Chapter: Just Friends

Instant Breakfast!! Yay!!! It's not a food, it's a drink... lol, I loved that.

Reviewer: mlstr
Date: 07/09/05 15:00
Chapter: Guarded Heart

I LOVE Sarah Dessen [I especially like The Truth About Forever...], and I LOVE your stories! This one was awesome, I love looking at it from your POV. :)

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 06/21/05 12:13
Chapter: Auntie Erin

*sniff* Encore! Encore! That was beautiful! Although I had hoped to see the wedding...I still feel terrible for Sirius...anyways here are the answers to those Q's. 1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) SIRIUS! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) Erin! She's cool! And Leah, Vita was nice too and Ruby was also. 3) What was your favorite chapter? um...oh gees...can't tell...I guess 18 and 5 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) I just had an exam so...no thanks. Pretty much any by Sirius or James. 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan!!! That *bleep* 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? Never read it so...I can't answer the rest. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. YUP!!! Of course I've read ur other fics! ANOTHER JOB VERY WELL DONE!!! KEEP WRITING!!!

Reviewer: KatieWeasley
Date: 06/13/05 19:22
Chapter: Auntie Erin

Oh, I'm soo sad that it's over. This is one of my fav fan fics of all time. You did a really great job. Now, to answer your questions... 1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) I would have to say Lily. I think you did a good job with her. Of course, Sirius was great too! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) My favorite of your characters was definetly Ruby. Her mom was just so mean and she was so quite about it. Most people would have yelled back at their mom. 3) What was your favorite chapter? Probably Chapter 18, Desperate Times. I don't really know why, I was just the one I liked the best. 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) This is a tough one. I guess It's this one... “Why would you let a Ravenclaw into the Gryffindor Common Room?” Leah asked, very slowly so he would appreciate the emphasis she was showing on her words. “I know you find my blatant disregard for the rules of Hogwarts sexy,” he explained all-knowing. “But that does not mean you should act as if I’m at fault in front of all these people. Jenna just wanted to see Lily, so I, being a gentlemen and attractive rebel, let her in.” Mostly everyone looked ready to smack Sirius on the face, although Erin Parker looked as if she might kiss him. “Sirius,” she squealed. “You might have actually done the right thing!” “Everyone,” he whispered. “I did not do anything to her. She is saying this upon her own free will. Let’s take note.” “Lily knows James still likes her,” Erin reminded them. “If she knows this, she may actually give him a chance.” “This is Lily we’re talking about,” Ruby pointed out. “There is no way anyone could predict one measly thing regarding the whereabouts of that girl. She is a mystery to all.” “Preach on, sister,” Sirius muttered, nodding his head. So it's more of a few paragraphs that a quote, but oh well. 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan!!! What a Jerk. I hate him. He's evil. 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? Yes, I have read "This Lullaby" I was a really good book. I think you did a good job of changing it just enough. It was different enough to be two separate stories, but similar enough that you could tell this was based on the book. There were deffinate similarities, like the part where James sees Lily and says "You look nice, Hot date?" just like in the book, but there were major differences,too. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. I've read Lily and James:Their Story of Love, Catch My Fall, You Were Mine, and Quidditch Pitch. They were all really good. This is my favorite, but they were great too. I think I'll read the others now.

Reviewer: jezzagoose
Date: 06/10/05 2:16
Chapter: Auntie Erin

fantastic as per usual i luv ur sotries soo much!!!!! 1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) Sirius was my fav i think he's hilarious in ur stories 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) i loved leah i thought she was kool and erin 3) What was your favorite chapter? oh all of them 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) “Where’s Lily?” she questioned, taking a quick check down the table. “And James?” “Together, perhaps?” Sirius suggested. His dark eyebrows waggled at this thoughts. Leah rolled her eyes. “Not likely,” she answered. “Is she still in bed?” “Yes,” Ruby sighed. “Wouldn’t move. The poor thing is obviously confused.” “James Potter tends to do that to people,” Erin explained. “Quite a calculating person if you ask me.” “Calculating? Prongs?” Sirius strung together. “You’ve got it all wrong. My Prongsie is very simple and very direct. He hates to hide feelings away. Now, Lily dearest seems to have that very problem.” He grabbed a stray piece of toast and began nibbling on it. Simultaneously, Leah and Sirius swapped food, helping themselves to each other’s breakfasts without so much as a word. “Did you two elope last night?” Vita blurted out. Ruby nudged her in the ribs. 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) ETHAN!!!!!!! 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? no ihvnt but i will now 7) Have you read my other fics? yes all of them keep on writing!!!!!!

Reviewer: 7 11 all the way
Date: 06/08/05 19:54
Chapter: Auntie Erin

this was great well done as always!! 1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) my fave is sirus (because he crazy) and remus (because hes remus of course) 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) i loved leah and erin 3) What was your favorite chapter? my fave was "freah tears" because all the drama that goes on (i heart drama... and sirus) lol! 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking)“What kind of asinine joke is this? If someone is messing with our minds, let me tell you, they’re very fragile,” Ruby called, looking at Sirius with squinted eyes.“Very fragile,” she repeated in a dangerous voice. (i loved that "very fragile"!) and i liked :Well,” he offered. “I guess I can see why. The two of them have been at each other’s throats since the beginning of Hogwarts history. Anyone want to put three galleons on how long it lasts?” “Sirius,” Vita lectured. “Putting money on things like these is very insensitive and it’s not something one would-” “I’ve got three galleons,” Leah told him, fishing in her pocket to pick out three golden coins. “I say one month.” (that was great too) 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan he is so evil!!! i wanted to hit him!! 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? no i didnt sry! 7) Have you read my other fics? yes! i love like all ur fics! ur a great writter!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 06/08/05 19:44
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) In this fic it was Lily, all the way! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) I know that I should say Erin or something like that but, I really have grown to love VITA! YAY VITA! I LOVE YOU! sry, I'm over it now. 3) What was your favorite chapter? My fave was totally Finally! I was soooo happy!!!!:) 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) “What in the name of Merlin is so funny?” Vita demanded. “Don’t mind them,” Remus whispered. “They’re an odd bunch.” “Lily and James!” Leah said, putting her hands together. “James and Lily.” “Broom closet! Sticking charm! Laughed-fell over-giggled like a little girl,” Sirius managed to say, clutching his side from the stitches that had formed near his abdomen. “Lily hurt James so bad you hid him in a broom closet and laughed like a little girl?” Ruby asked, trying to put it all together. 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) I HATE ETHAN SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!! kay, and now i'm over that too, sry. 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? I think that this was a little different (it's my fave new book.) but still related and verrrrrrrrry good! 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. DUH I HAVE READ THEM? what else ya got? I really liked this fic, but it was so short!! :):):)

Reviewer: kikimodo
Date: 06/08/05 18:38
Chapter: Auntie Erin

hmmm....i've already forgotten all the individual questions, so i'll just try to randomly answer them. my favorite jkr character was....haha, practically all the marauders :D i love how sirius and james mature (coughsortacough) and actually show some character, and of course i ALWAYS love remus :D i especially loved the remus/ruby pairing and how that helped her with her insecurities. my favorite created character was either ruby or erin. haha, one of my favorite scenes had to be when erin and leah were destroying things in potions and not noticing. that was adorable. i loved the whole thing. i really did. i'm sorry that it's over and i hope you'll be writing a lot more! thanks for everything :)

Reviewer: Lily Aurora
Date: 06/08/05 17:46
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) Lily or James, of course. I have to admit as much as I love Sirius, he wasn't as hilarious and crazy as in your other fics. 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) Erin. She's cool. 3) What was your favorite chapter? Blindingly Happy. 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) "Lily and James getting married. This I had to see..." 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan! He has to get over Lily dumping him and go get a life! 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? Yes, currently my favorite book of all time. It slightly resembles the main events, but I'm glad to say it does not exactly follow the book. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. Oh, yes, and they're GREAT!

Reviewer: annenikki
Date: 06/08/05 16:37
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) i love lily, she is so real and so perfect at the same time 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) leah i think 3) What was your favorite chapter? i liked chapter 19 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) make lots of mini lilys and that paragrah 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) ethan 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? haven't read it 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. nope sorry i haven't read them yet

Reviewer: Parvati Patil
Date: 06/08/05 15:20
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) - My favourite character was James! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) -Erin. 3) What was your favorite chapter? -Chapter 15-Not In The Plans 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) -“Victory doesn’t feel so sweet right now,” Leah told them sadly. 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) -Ethan!!! 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? -I never read it. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. Yes I have read all of your fics. My favourites are Beyond the Veil and Mezmerized. But they are all really good

Reviewer: hp3190
Date: 06/08/05 14:52
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? James, or Sirius, but prob James- gotta love him! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? Erin- so fun! 3) What was your favorite chapter? prob the broom closet one! i laughed when they pushed them in there! 4) What was your favorite quote? "There is not one case in which two parties can date, then break up, and then resume a friendship. It's not logical." - Lily (Just Friends) 5) Who did you hate the most? prob Jenna- arrrrrrr :@ mean gurl!!! 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? i have read it- but i dont member if it was similar or not. they were both really good tho. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. i think so... YES i have! very well writtten. ur a very good author! keep writing! ur stories are great!!

Reviewer: Lexy Granger
Date: 06/03/05 18:37
Chapter: Finally

gotta luv da fluff!!!!!!!! Okay, so I just read the original of this, by Dessen, omg such a freakin' good story. I was siriusly adicted! my friend was all like 'oh it's boring' , but it is now my new favorite book, and Scarlett is in it! y did no one tell me this!? Anyways, updaties soonsies!

Reviewer: Tashskies
Date: 06/03/05 18:03
Chapter: Finally

That was absolutely fantastic.... I feel all warm and fluffy inside!! Sigh, life is good... life is good... 10/10!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 06/02/05 15:39
Chapter: Finally

Aww it's over?!! BOOO!! I loved this story. This was definetly one of my faves. Im sad its over now, but fortunetly you have a bunch of other stories that im reading so it's not as though im missing out on the great works of secret lily:)

Reviewer: Lilir Wyddfa
Date: 05/31/05 16:22
Chapter: Finally

Great story, I loved it!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 05/31/05 15:20
Chapter: Finally

oohh how wonderful!!:) i love sirius..funniest man ever!

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