Your story is great!! as you can see (my name) my favourite character is James and I must say that Leah was your best original character...
) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) I love Lily. She is always the one full of emotion but too afraid to show it.
Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.)
I liked Erin because of her and Sirius's past and how she deals with it.
5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) I actually hated Vita. I thought she was a complete oddball and didnt belong in this story.
7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them.
Yes I have read 3 other today!! cant get enough!
Interesting story. I never thought about Lily's other boyfriends, before James. I had this image of a Hermione-ish type of girl. But you wrote it well :) Lily's character is clear, her emotions are well-described, and her friends are good for her.
I like the Marauders interaction. :D The line with James saying Lily's name is great, for some reason that I don't know. It just seems something he would do.
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) James. I think I didn't like Lily that much in this fic... probably because she was so indecisive. 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) Erin, definitely. Her and Leah were very funny in Potions. 3) What was your favorite chapter? I liked Realizations because it had my favorite quote and I found out who Sirius liked! 4) What was your favorite quote? Okay, this one made me laugh out loud: “There I was,” he ignored her. “Standing in line, about to get sorted. My nerves were a mess, I know, hard to believe. The Sorting Hat was singing it’s song. Sirius was dancing along to it. I remember this because I was thinking, ‘Wow, he has no rhythm’. Anyways, as I was standing there, I saw that eye-catching hair of yours. Even at eleven, I knew you were something special. I felt a feeling that you were someone worth getting to know. Since then, I’ve just been drawn to you. It may have been the magic of the school, or even Sirius’ dancing. I tend to think it was the hair.” 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) I so hated Ethan. I really loathed him. 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? No, I haven't read it, but I might... it sounds good. 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. Yes, I am a fan of your work, I think the only one I haven't read is Catch My Fall, because I liked Potter's Charm a lot more than Lily and James: Their Story of Love. I just liked the characters in Potter's Charm a lot more, so I haven't really looked into Catch My Fall. I've also read all of your one-shots on HPFF and I love them! You are an amazing writer. I loved this story. *10*
1) Lily 2) Leah 3) one where lily n james kissed 4) “He’s perfect,” she said. James nodded. He obviously thought so as well. “He’s too perfect. I’m not looking for perfect.” 5) ruby's mum 6) havnt read it 7) im going too
Pretty good story you capture the brilliance in the human heart. And i like that your storys are short because the long ones take too long to read
Perfect ure a gr8 writer Definatly 1 of the best reads. I BET u get asked all the time are u some how related to Jk
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,). i seriously loved Sirius and his attitude. he was hilarious, yet very down to earth 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.). i loved erin, just like i loved sirius lol 3) What was your favorite chapter? i'm not sure (too lazy to look) but the one where they were locked in the closet 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) ick i'm too lazy to look right now sorry 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) um ethan cuz really, he was a complete a**, ya know. but his character did fit into the story really well 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? no, i think i will htough 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. i will definately go read your other ffs P.S. ok so i don't go around dishing compliments on ff's so feel really lucky bout this. i think your story was really, really well written (i haven't read many ff's with writing like this) although it was based on another book, the story line was quite original and all the little games played were really interesting. all in all, this is one of the best ff's i've ever read (and i've read&written alot)
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,) James!! 2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.) Ruby 3) What was your favorite chapter? the second-last one 4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) have too much! 5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan!! god, he is ***** 6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? sorry, haven't read it!! but I loved your story! 7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. I've read the one about the masked ball. P.S I love your fics!!!
1) James!!!
2) Ruby
3) Idk, all of them after Lily kissed James...
4) Idk... sry to lazy to look, im really tired right now..
5) Ruby's Parents
6) I haven't read it sry,
7) I read some, and loved them!! must read more!
i lyke it... but electricity doesn't work in Hogwarts, becuase there's to much magic in the air.
I remain undecided for all of your questions (yes, you better belive it), except for the last one, in which I am currently in the process of doing so. Great story!!! lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalala Sorry, I just had to get that out.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...DIE ETHAN DIE!!!!
AWWW....Lol, makes you see the mean people can be nice too!(look at Jenna!)By the way, take back what i said in the last review...i know how Jenna got in now! (i wish we could edit reviews!) This fic is sooooooooo good!!!!!!!
um...if Lily was in her dorm, how could Jenna have gotten in if she was a Ravenclaw and didnt know the password? I love the idea though!So sweet!
This story is so cool!But i feel sorry for James....awwwww
whoops!Just seen your afternote..ok they are NOT together...but OH SO SWEET!10/10
YAY!!!!!!WOOOO!They're finally together!
