Reviews For Vindicated
Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:26
Chapter: Comforting Returns

I'm in love...with this story! It's got just the right touches of humor and everything! 9/10. (Sorry, I don't usually give tens.)

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:19
Chapter: Breaking Boundaries

I love this story now! Except that no staff member at Hogwarts would ever put a contraction in a letter. Not to students, anyway. It'd be too "personal."
These words from Erin to Lily brought laughter to my lips:
Now, donít think Iíve forgotten what I promised before we left. You are not, I mean absolutely not, going to give anyone the speech this year. Youíre going to find a boyfriend, fall in love, make tons of little Lilyís and make me baby-sit them. Iíll become Auntie Erin and live alone; depressed and distraught.

Love it! 9/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:13
Chapter: Guarded Heart

Wow. I'm just totally bonding with this Lily right now; her attitude towards boys and relationships perfectly reflect my own!
You introduced too many characters in too short a passage. That gave me the feeling that information was being forced on me too fast for my brain to handle. I kept going back to check who was who in the story. Also, I felt that all of the characters except Leah were too Mary Sue; instead of starting off with how beautiful they were, just go straight into the character and how it shapes/shaped their habits and ways of speaking, how it contrasts with their physical characteristics, etc.
I love this quote: ďHearts will never be made practical until they are made unbreakable.Ē Where is it from?
Overall, excellent opening chapter! I look forward to the next one.

Reviewer: lilywink
Date: 06/27/06 13:53
Chapter: Guarded Heart

I loved it. one of my favorite James/lily stories.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 06/17/06 10:26
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1. James of course
3. Yeah right, like I could choose.
4.Walked into Great Hall and nearly had a heart attack. There were James Potter and Lily Evans. At the same table. Breathing the same air. Sitting by one another! Too much to take, must breathe.
5. Ethan, definatley
6. Yes, I read it. Yes, I loved it. Yes, i liked this about the same. No, it wasn't too close.
7. No I haven't. Yes, I will.

So generally when I get to here, i tell the author not to stop writing...Really, you're amazing!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 06/17/06 10:12
Chapter: Just Friends

That challenge dexter! I love this so much!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 06/17/06 9:02
Chapter: Guarded Heart

Oh my god! I love This Lullaby! Actually, I love all of Sarah Dessen's books! You know what else I love? That chapter.

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 18:00
Chapter: Auntie Erin

heres some of teh questions answered:
favorite jkr character:sirius
favorite original char: erin
favorite chapter:18
favortie quote: they broke up!! the world is over.....
hate the most: lily ( too emotional)
havent read this lullby
i have read your other fan fics your my favorite author have at least reaad 5 of you stories.

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 17:45
Chapter: Desperate Times

i liked this chapter. especially when it involves operations to get james and lily together. heheheeh

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 17:33
Chapter: Let Me Go

just curios, is there even one transformation of remus going into his werewolf state? i guess ill find out shortly and if there isnt one transformation it might be because the story is already completed.

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 17:15
Chapter: Blindingly Happy

i really liked this chapter and it came to mind that i jsut remebered that you didnt like hockey. just to let you know i play on an all girls hockey team and i love it
please dont judge because i play hockey.

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 16:43
Chapter: Chemistry

im a little confused at the end of the chapter did someone purposely hit james with the bludger and lily saw it or did she see james wave at her??

Reviewer: tonks_quill1803
Date: 06/15/06 16:28
Chapter: Against All Odds

personally i like this chapter becasue james seemiongly is breaking down lilys barrier of her fears
you did a great job

Reviewer: witchwriter113
Date: 06/09/06 10:51
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) James/Sirius; James is cute and sweet while Sirius is gorgeous and bad

2) Leah was my fave original char.

3) I liked the chapter where they got pushed into the broom closet. Lily and James that is.

4) Youíre going to find a boyfriend, fall in love, make tons of little Lilyís and make me baby-sit them. Iíll become Auntie Erin and live alone; depressed and distraught.

5) Ethan. He's a jealous arse

6) No I havent yet but I think I will

7) Same havent yet....


Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 05/23/06 17:45
Chapter: Auntie Erin

hey it was a really great chapter and story over all all ove your stories are!!! =D

Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 05/22/06 22:33
Chapter: Finally

Beautiful story!!! 13/10!! are the answers:
2-Erin (she's sort of like me and i can compare with her!!)
3-Finally (i'll say it again...finally!!!)
4-"Evans was snogging!" ( i mean...its about time!)
5-Etthan...thought he was nice, but i guess i was wrong.
6- No..i haven't read it, but now i am.
7- Yes!!! I love them all!!!

Reviewer: wsc12b
Date: 05/13/06 11:32
Chapter: Auntie Erin

anothewr succes

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 05/08/06 15:26
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) James
3) Desperate Times
4) I don't feel like searching and one doesn't really come to mind...
5) Ethan
6)Haven't read it
7) I read a few of them, actually! They are really good! Or else I wouldn't have read this one!

Reviewer: elissamay
Date: 05/03/06 22:01
Chapter: Guarded Heart

i remember reading this story a while ago. i dint remember if i reviewed but it was still called this lullaby. i read that book, it was awesome, i loved how ya kinda morphed that story to james and lily. pretty similar. amazing story. (your ans sarah dessen, i loveeee her stories!)
dexter and james man, there like uncanny almost. =)

watch this be the wrong story. lol

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 04/30/06 17:31
Chapter: Auntie Erin

I loved it. I love you. No more to say.
1. James, all the way.
2. Erin. Shes mad cool.
3. Chapter 18. LOVED IT.
4. The one with Sirius trying to string words together after the broom closet incident.
5. Ethan. He is a fag.
6. No I haven't, but I want to now.
7. Yes I have, Potters Charm and L&J: Their story of Love.
About that: I have a little story for you. Back in the sad days when I didnt have the internet, my friend used to always save stories on disks for me and give them to me to read on my non-internetable computer. She mainly gave me yours. She thought they were the bomb. Thanks to her, and thanks to you. I LOVE YOU!!! And ur stories, lol

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