Reviews For Vindicated
Reviewer: Lady Robin
Date: 07/26/06 20:41
Chapter: Auntie Erin

Eeeeeeeeeee
Read through this story over the past two days... loved it more than I can say. I love the look of your entire profile. Hurray for Lily/James fics!
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? I'm going to say James. Usually I'm a Sirius fan in Marauder fics, but he wasn't in this one very much, and the way you wrote James was...amazing. Much unlike the way I've seen him written over and over, which is obnoxious and self-centered and no one Lily would ever end up with. Very very very good on your part.
2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? I liked them all. Leah made me laugh, Erin gave me warm friendship fuzzies (haha), Ruby seemed so real. I like Vita, she just didn't seem to have quite as big a part. Very good again, I usually don't like OCs much.
3) What was your favorite chapter? I really liked "Let Me Go." Also chapters 7, 9, 12 and 13 which I'm too lazy to write out. Of course they were all lovely.
4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking) I liked what Lily said in chapter 18, "maybe I do deserve him, but I don't deserve you." Partly this is me being lazy and finding one as soon as I could, but also I really did like that one, thought it was quite sweet.
5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.) Ethan. Rat. Jenna wasn't as bad because at least she was nice to Lily in the end.
6) Have you read ĎThis Lullabyí written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different? Haven't read it =(
7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them. I'm reading "Solace" and I like it a lot... waiting for chapter 7!

Lovely work again. ^^;

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/08/06 15:43
Chapter: Auntie Erin

This story was great. It was descriptive, and you really got into the emotions of the characters. I loved it.

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:56
Chapter: Auntie Erin

Excellent idea of doing a "looking back" thing in the last chapter. 10/10!
1) Lily
2) I'd say Ruby because she has such a unique background (esp. with her mum...poor girl)
3) Um...I dunno...?
4) Now, donít think Iíve forgotten what I promised before we left. You are not, I mean absolutely not, going to give anyone the speech this year. Youíre going to find a boyfriend, fall in love, make tons of little Lilyís and make me baby-sit them. Iíll become Auntie Erin and live alone; depressed and distraught.
5) Ethan, by far
6) No
7) Yes

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:51
Chapter: Finally

Aaaah!!! Just one more chapter and this is...OVER????
9.5/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:48
Chapter: Desperate Times

Oh, by the way, it's "foolproof," not "full proof."

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:46
Chapter: Desperate Times

Fluffy. *sigh*
9/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:41
Chapter: Just Friends

Um...
Not much to comment on.
8/10 (sorry, but there really wasn't much action)

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:38
Chapter: Let Me Go

Wow, Ruby's mum has some serious issues going on there.
*sigh* James and Lily need to get back together again! Grr!
Okay. :D 9/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:35
Chapter: Not In The Plans

Hmmmm...Ethan is so extremely mean. But Lily hurt him, so it's understandable. How will James and Lily get back together?

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:29
Chapter: Blindingly Happy

So cute and fluffy! 10/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:25
Chapter: All For You

Yessss! Some action at last! 10/10!

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/04/06 0:18
Chapter: Fresh Tears

So Jenna's bad, then she's good?
But great chappie! 9/10.

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 23:19
Chapter: Chemistry

Jenna should die.
End of story.
Sweet and fluffy chappie with all the elements of unrequited love, jealousy, and revenge!
9/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 23:12
Chapter: Opening Up

I loved this chapter! 10/10, definitely!

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 23:05
Chapter: Against All Odds

So she kissed him but they're not together? How does that work out?
10/10 for the suh-weeeet action!

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:55
Chapter: Realizations

He likes Leah? Hmmm...
You seem to be overusing the word "perceptive."
Thw passage where the Marauders make fun of Wormtail was certainky entertaining.
8.5/10

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:47
Chapter: Wasting My Time

Wow. Excellent chapter. Great argument between Lily and James. 10/10.

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:43
Chapter: Only Fooling Herself

Oh. My. Goodness. Poor James! But if I were Lily, I would've done that too. :) I'm so coldhearted and tend to try to escape embarrassing situations by lying. *sigh* It is one of my greater faults.
Excellent cliffie! 10/10!

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:35
Chapter: Strolling with Sirius

Not a lot of action in this one even with the talk between Sirius and Lily. Just hoping the next one holds more...
8/10 (I'm just feeling XP! right now. Sorry.)

Reviewer: Kelin
Date: 07/03/06 22:30
Chapter: You're Never There

Short, but gets some action in. Gee, Lily was a little harsh. Detention for holding hands?
9/10

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