Reviews For Vindicated
Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/04/07 16:13
Chapter: You're Never There

Omg....I think he just gave ma and lily a good leason about love
This chapter has really great meanings to it
Best one!!!!!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/04/07 15:42
Chapter: Breaking Boundaries

Loved it...I can't wait to get that book ur baseing this story of ur on

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 03/04/07 15:27
Chapter: Guarded Heart

This is great!!!!!!!!
I lob this story already
I can feel the heat and passion that is yet to come between james and his so lovely lily!!!!!

Reviewer: Raddish_Earings
Date: 02/16/07 0:02
Chapter: Auntie Erin

I love all your fics and this one was just as good as the rest. Ethan must die and Jenna lives on. Afterall she redeemed herself in the end! I love James/Lily fanfics, so keep up the good work. =)

Reviewer: mystery_solved
Date: 02/03/07 18:28
Chapter: Breaking Boundaries

Wow. Chapter 2 and I am already hooked in. This. Is. GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: elementalenchantress
Date: 01/26/07 0:07
Chapter: Auntie Erin

Wonderful story, as usual. Just curious, but have you ever considered writing a story in which Lily is going after James, instead of vise-versa?

Reviewer: Kelley4
Date: 01/14/07 20:57
Chapter: Guarded Heart

So i was reading, and at first was a little hesitant i'll admit, but as i continued reading i thought "hey, it shows promise, it reminds me a ton of that sarah dessen book" (she's one of my favorite authors, and i always get her different books confused, but now that i think about it this is DEFINITELY this lullaby.) haha anyway, i know many people have probably left reviews almost exactly like this but i just wanted to let you know that.... and that i like your story so far.... and many of your other stories.... alright, must go read more!

Reviewer: Zena_gabby_n_joxer
Date: 01/12/07 0:30
Chapter: Guarded Heart

I could tell right away that you got the idea from This Lullaby
I like the story so far

Reviewer: Lilyflower24
Date: 12/28/06 11:07
Chapter: Auntie Erin

I'm just going to answer the questions that you asked---
1)LIlly, I loved how you based her on the book This Lullaby, but still gave her your own sparks...
2)Leah... I relate to her best...
3)my favorite chapter was #16 "Let me go" I don't know why... I guess cuz it was dramatic
4)"Hearts are never made practical until they are made unbreakable" in the story you said that it was taken from a movie... what movie? Ever since I read that yesterday, I've been writing it down everywhere so that I'll remember it...
5)Ethan... he was an bloody a-hole
6)yes, I've read the book... I think that the basis of this story is based on th ebook which is okay, but you also brought in the JKR-ness, and also your own spark, so no, it was DEFINITLY not based too much on This Lullaby...
7)you have too many stories... It's hard to read all of them... but I've read alot of them... you can go searching for my other reviews if you want!

Reviewer: Lilyflower24
Date: 12/27/06 12:50
Chapter: Guarded Heart

I loved tha book, and this story is awesome so far

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/21/06 19:07
Chapter: Auntie Erin

1) James
2) Erin
3) 18/19
4) Sirius, Leah, and I get sick of all this awkwardness and decide to just throw them in a broom closet and let them get it over with. Itís rash, but full proof according to Sirius.
5) Ethan all the way
6) No
7) Most, and of course I'll reread!
Please write a sequel! About their wedding or something, cuz this was beautiful! I loved the mush, it was perfect. ~Prongsies_Girl_93

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/19/06 22:58
Chapter: Let Me Go

Damn Ruby's mom. That was so mean! I didn't think that a mom could be that mean (aside from Sirius')! Keep up the beautiful writing.

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 12/19/06 22:39
Chapter: Opening Up

You're breaking my heart! It was such a sad chapter!

Reviewer: margotbits
Date: 12/12/06 17:33
Chapter: Guarded Heart

I love Sarah Dessen, and I can see a lot of her writing styles in your story. Same with "Solace." I'm not quite sure how to end a review, so I guess I'll see you in the next life:)

Reviewer: Callisto Anaxandra
Date: 12/11/06 22:53
Chapter: Guarded Heart

As soon as Lily said, "We need to talk," I thought of Remy's The Talk. You did a good job following Sarah Dessen's style. :)

Reviewer: HPismylife
Date: 12/06/06 21:04
Chapter: Guarded Heart

i absolutely luv this storyy!! u r the best story writer in the entire world i am NOT joking! my fave couples r James/Lily and u have mainly written abt them!! i

Date: 10/26/06 19:26
Chapter: Desperate Times crying cute


Date: 10/26/06 19:13
Chapter: Let Me Go

omg.thats so sad.ruby's mother is a witch!!!!well lol she is but i mean like an evil witch.awwwww.poor ruby.and lily!!she felt bad for hurting james!!!awwwww


Date: 10/26/06 18:54
Chapter: Not In The Plans

OMG.I REALLY AM CRYING.LILY IS SO listening to christina aguilera's song hurt and ithas to do with missing her father and that she cant move on and that shes goes perfectly with this story!!! sad.i am crying.i cry alone listening to the song but now with the story too??youre doing so great


Date: 10/25/06 20:43
Chapter: Only Fooling Herself

omfg!that b*****im srry.i never curse!!!! but really?thas gonna brake his heart!awwww.and he was RIGHT there!!! write so great and for shuer theyre gonna end up wuldnt they.they always do


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