Omg....I think he just gave ma and lily a good leason about love
This chapter has really great meanings to it
Loved it...I can't wait to get that book ur baseing this story of ur on
This is great!!!!!!!!
I lob this story already
I can feel the heat and passion that is yet to come between james and his so lovely lily!!!!!
I love all your fics and this one was just as good as the rest. Ethan must die and Jenna lives on. Afterall she redeemed herself in the end! I love James/Lily fanfics, so keep up the good work. =)
Wow. Chapter 2 and I am already hooked in. This. Is. GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful story, as usual. Just curious, but have you ever considered writing a story in which Lily is going after James, instead of vise-versa?
So i was reading, and at first was a little hesitant i'll admit, but as i continued reading i thought "hey, it shows promise, it reminds me a ton of that sarah dessen book" (she's one of my favorite authors, and i always get her different books confused, but now that i think about it this is DEFINITELY this lullaby.) haha anyway, i know many people have probably left reviews almost exactly like this but i just wanted to let you know that.... and that i like your story so far.... and many of your other stories.... alright, must go read more!
I could tell right away that you got the idea from This Lullaby
I like the story so far
I'm just going to answer the questions that you asked---
1)LIlly, I loved how you based her on the book This Lullaby, but still gave her your own sparks...
2)Leah... I relate to her best...
3)my favorite chapter was #16 "Let me go" I don't know why... I guess cuz it was dramatic
4)"Hearts are never made practical until they are made unbreakable" in the story you said that it was taken from a movie... what movie? Ever since I read that yesterday, I've been writing it down everywhere so that I'll remember it...
5)Ethan... he was an bloody a-hole
6)yes, I've read the book... I think that the basis of this story is based on th ebook which is okay, but you also brought in the JKR-ness, and also your own spark, so no, it was DEFINITLY not based too much on This Lullaby...
7)you have too many stories... It's hard to read all of them... but I've read alot of them... you can go searching for my other reviews if you want!
I loved tha book, and this story is awesome so far
4) Sirius, Leah, and I get sick of all this awkwardness and decide to just throw them in a broom closet and let them get it over with. It’s rash, but full proof according to Sirius.
5) Ethan all the way
7) Most, and of course I'll reread!
Please write a sequel! About their wedding or something, cuz this was beautiful! I loved the mush, it was perfect. ~Prongsies_Girl_93
Damn Ruby's mom. That was so mean! I didn't think that a mom could be that mean (aside from Sirius')! Keep up the beautiful writing.
You're breaking my heart! It was such a sad chapter!
I love Sarah Dessen, and I can see a lot of her writing styles in your story. Same with "Solace." I'm not quite sure how to end a review, so I guess I'll see you in the next life:)
As soon as Lily said, "We need to talk," I thought of Remy's The Talk. You did a good job following Sarah Dessen's style. :)
i absolutely luv this storyy!! u r the best story writer in the entire world i am NOT joking! my fave couples r James/Lily and u have mainly written abt them!! i
awwwww.im crying again.argh.so sweet.awww.so cute
omg.thats so sad.ruby's mother is a witch!!!!well lol she is but i mean like an evil witch.awwwww.poor ruby.and lily!!she felt bad for hurting james!!!awwwww
OMG.I REALLY AM CRYING.LILY IS SO STUPID.omg.im listening to christina aguilera's song hurt and ithas to do with missing her father and that she cant move on and that shes sacred.it goes perfectly with this story!!!awww.so sad.i am crying.i cry alone listening to the song but now with the story too??youre doing so great
omfg!that b*****im srry.i never curse!!!! but really?thas gonna brake his heart!awwww.and he was RIGHT there!!!omfg.you write so great and for shuer theyre gonna end up together.lol.why wuldnt they.they always do