Nice one! now I'mmmmm off to the next chapter, the wonderful chapter of Vindicated. blah blah blah blah blah, something about Oz or was or something like that!
Like the chapter and Moony's 'Guiding Words' and James whole, 'You should market this stuff, Moony' thing. i hope there are pranks in store though, or i may have to send you threatening stuff to you for not putting any in while you had the chance! JK, JK, Jk
I really liked this chapter, but i imagined Lily's reaction quite differently, like the whole theory of 'Dumbledore's on Drugs!' but i like the whole walk in walk out scenario. well, i would say keep it up, but your done with the story, soo... keep it up when you write your next story!
I like the start of this chapter, but all of Lily's friends are going to be hard to remember. well, you might have already killed one off; i'm pretty sure that you've already finished the story, so, okay. nice job!
1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (James, Lily, Sirius, etc,)
2) Who was your favorite original character in this fic? (Erin, Leah, Ruby, Vita, etc.)
Erin and Leah
3) What was your favorite chapter?
4) What was your favorite quote? (Go Looking)
5) Who did you hate the most? (Ethan, Jenna, etc.)
6) Have you read ‘This Lullaby’ written by Sarah Dessen? Do you think it was too closely related to that or did you like that it was a little different?
7) Have you read my other fics? If not, do go read them.
Lily, Erin (so me), Ethan
THis fic is awesome! I will read you're other ones I promise!
i thought this was a relly good story and it was closely related to this lullaby(great book!!! i love sarah dessen)i especially liked the part where james and lily were lokced in the broom closet. it was pretty funny. my favorite character that you created was Erin because she is the smart one. i have read some of your fics(james and lily:their story of love, catch my fall, behind the mask...) i really like your writing style.
wow, i must say quite a chapter....
That is so twisted and wrong that Sirius brought up the bet!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO get some glue and smack them together! What am I babbling about? You've already finisheed the bloody thing!
WOW! u should serously become an author! i love ur stories! i'm working on one of my own, it is about Hannah Abbot and Harry. any advice?
3.You're Never There
4.Hearts will never be made practical until they are made unbreakable.
5.Ethan was a *****, and Jenna was a really sweet girl.
I love this story sooooooo much. It's amazing. You are an awesome writer. Everything is so realistic. The characters are so real. I feel like I'm waking up when I have to stop reading. I am in awe of your wonderful skill.
Fuckin bitch....srry...I'm just mad
But I still lob ur stories!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lily in ur stories is amazing....she so smart brave loyal caring
But when I comes to james she hopeless!!!!!!
Wat do u mean by james kissing her temple?
Just like to no....not sure wat the temple is!!!!!!!!
I feel hot tears starting to fall
Yes....action...thats a good thing...hahaha
Wat...and why is that?
Good I lob this story
God bless you!!!!!!!
And ur good ass stories!!!!!!!