Oh wow... I know all about that frustration, but I've never met anyone who turned to the dark side because of it! It's an interesting story.
hehehehe. Voldy duped by a claw machine? No wonder he turned evil.
good, well done.
short but i liked it alot.
poor wittle tom, he works so hard!!
keep writing!!!
Ok, I'm reviewing. That was an interesting take on why Voldy became evil, though I think that he was already a little, shall we say, insane and angry before his 5th year. It's hard to imagine him skipping "merrily"--but that just adds to the humor.
All-in-all, it wasn't the funniest story, but I thought it was nice. Great job. ;)
Arrgh! I know how he felt. I hate those stupid things. xP I want to smash them sometimes.
Anyways, that was really funny.
"Nooo!!! My precious!!!"- xD
HAHAHAHA!!! Hilarious! DIE EVIL CLAW MACHINES!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *gasps for breath* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Very funny idea. Claw machines are extremely annoying when they drop your prize before you've actually won it. I went to Flordia once and there was a machine that worked nearly every single time you put coins in. We got like, seven stuffed animals before we realized it how much we'd spent. Anyway, great story!!
hilarious!!! one of the funniest fan-fics i've read!!!
That's so true - I hate those damn claw machines! I've lost many a pound on them. Good job with the funnies, I wouldn't be surprised if it were the real reason for his snarkiness! :D
That was silly, but funny. Those machines could drive someone to commit mass murder. I could see that. Good job.
evil claw machines must meet their doooooom!!!!!!!!! HAHA GREAT STORY 10/10
hey, very good story! very readable and...reader friendly. hahaha, i was laughing the whole time. i like that riddle is an actual person though, that's pretty awesome. A plus, it was pretty awesome!! Chloe "Longing For Light"
Didn't actuall laugh out loud, but was smile-laughing through the whole thing!!
FUNNY!!! ME LIKEY!!!! YEAH!!!! CLAW MACHINES R EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! I SHALL JOIN VOLDEMORT AND TOGETHER WE SHALL RID THIS WORLD OF PEOPLE WHO CREATE THINGS TO HURT US!!!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was great *wipes tear from eyes from laughing hard* I understand Tom's pain, I too have had really bad luck with claw machines.
i like the lady's name-- it's ...odd-ish-ful and you have a grammar (sp?) inyour summary it's jenna and me not jennna and i
That was really really random. Not that that's a bad thing...I personally believe that this is a perfectly logical explanation of how Tom Riddle became evil! I too have had horrible experiences at the accursed claw machiene and now refuse to go near them, as I feel that they are part of an evil plot for global domination. If you think about it, it all makes perfect sense. I'm rambling now. Sorry. Horray for weird-ness!
Author's Response: Yay! We love being random! I know, stupid claw machines should be exiled!!!!It's ok that you rambled, I do it all the time!!! Yay!! Weirdness in extreme bunches!!!!
