Reviews For Evil Claw Machines
Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 10/18/08 15:14
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Oh wow... I know all about that frustration, but I've never met anyone who turned to the dark side because of it! It's an interesting story.

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 07/21/08 12:48
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

hehehehe. Voldy duped by a claw machine? No wonder he turned evil.

Reviewer: Milliebaby123
Date: 06/16/08 5:16
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

good, well done.
short but i liked it alot.
poor wittle tom, he works so hard!!
keep writing!!!

Reviewer: HagridsTheMan
Date: 03/06/08 15:53
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Ok, I'm reviewing. That was an interesting take on why Voldy became evil, though I think that he was already a little, shall we say, insane and angry before his 5th year. It's hard to imagine him skipping "merrily"--but that just adds to the humor.

All-in-all, it wasn't the funniest story, but I thought it was nice. Great job. ;)

Reviewer: Fantasystar
Date: 07/19/07 0:09
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Arrgh! I know how he felt. I hate those stupid things. xP I want to smash them sometimes.
Anyways, that was really funny.
"Nooo!!! My precious!!!"- xD

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 08/14/06 13:32
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

HAHAHAHA!!! Hilarious! DIE EVIL CLAW MACHINES!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! *gasps for breath* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/03/06 12:00
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Very funny idea. Claw machines are extremely annoying when they drop your prize before you've actually won it. I went to Flordia once and there was a machine that worked nearly every single time you put coins in. We got like, seven stuffed animals before we realized it how much we'd spent. Anyway, great story!!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 07/14/06 3:06
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Nice!

Reviewer: shiny_things2010
Date: 06/10/06 20:17
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

hilarious!!! one of the funniest fan-fics i've read!!!

Reviewer: Seventh_child
Date: 06/08/06 17:20
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

That's so true - I hate those damn claw machines! I've lost many a pound on them. Good job with the funnies, I wouldn't be surprised if it were the real reason for his snarkiness! :D

Reviewer: Accio_Brain
Date: 06/08/06 17:17
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

That was silly, but funny. Those machines could drive someone to commit mass murder. I could see that. Good job.

Reviewer: born4purple
Date: 04/10/06 16:09
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

evil claw machines must meet their doooooom!!!!!!!!! HAHA GREAT STORY 10/10

Reviewer: longingforlight
Date: 10/13/05 19:51
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

hey, very good story! very readable and...reader friendly. hahaha, i was laughing the whole time. i like that riddle is an actual person though, that's pretty awesome. A plus, it was pretty awesome!! Chloe "Longing For Light"

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 08/15/05 3:41
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

Didn't actuall laugh out loud, but was smile-laughing through the whole thing!!

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 02/11/05 11:24
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

FUNNY!!! ME LIKEY!!!! YEAH!!!! CLAW MACHINES R EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! I SHALL JOIN VOLDEMORT AND TOGETHER WE SHALL RID THIS WORLD OF PEOPLE WHO CREATE THINGS TO HURT US!!!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lizzygirl
Date: 02/08/05 18:09
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was great *wipes tear from eyes from laughing hard* I understand Tom's pain, I too have had really bad luck with claw machines.

Reviewer: Limey
Date: 01/15/05 18:51
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

i like the lady's name-- it's ...odd-ish-ful and you have a grammar (sp?) inyour summary it's jenna and me not jennna and i

Reviewer: Hermiones_Revenge
Date: 01/09/05 18:19
Chapter: Evil Claw Machines

That was really really random. Not that that's a bad thing...I personally believe that this is a perfectly logical explanation of how Tom Riddle became evil! I too have had horrible experiences at the accursed claw machiene and now refuse to go near them, as I feel that they are part of an evil plot for global domination. If you think about it, it all makes perfect sense. I'm rambling now. Sorry. Horray for weird-ness!

Author's Response: Yay! We love being random! I know, stupid claw machines should be exiled!!!!It's ok that you rambled, I do it all the time!!! Yay!! Weirdness in extreme bunches!!!!

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