Ohhh... Remus! This is so sad. This is really good. And I like the title. It struck me as much funnier than it probably is because I'm bloody tired. You should post moreof you fanficsd.
I am now absolutely speechless. Really. There is no reason why you can't develop this (except for time) in the way i told you before. Really. (ooh, you made me use the same word twice, see how much this impressed me?) I'm beyond words.
Great job. I really likes this line: "The demons that resided here did not belong to him, and their owner was gone." That gave me the shivers.
this is so so sad, and extremely well written. you describe everything so perfectly, it really captures lupin's feelings. well done!
Author's Response: thank you so much. please keep reading!
I truly believe that's how Lupin would react. Perfect 10!!!
Author's Response: Thank you ever so!
Another great story. I really like the details in this one, they're very good. Keep writing!! Another 10. :) P.s. I reallly hope you keep writing Girls. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! This one was particularly detail-oriented. I'll try to keep writing fanfic, but I have to make time for my original stuff (not to mention high school) as well!
Sad! But good! And I just got the title! I'm nore stupid than I thought!
Author's Response: You know the old saying-"You're no nore stupid than you think you are". Thanks!
Stella- oh wow. absolutely amazing, such an excellent bit of writing. now see what you've done, Lily and Vivian worked so hard to make me stop being depressed a year after OoTP came out and now i'm trying not to cry again. but a very beautiful job, as i think someone said, it's a great accomplishment to write so well without dialouge. it's an accomplishment to write that well WITH dialouge.
Author's Response: How many people are talking to me? Well, anyways, thank you. That means a lot; in the future, perhaps I'll completely ditch dialogue altogether? Then again, I've written bits with only dialogue...Thanks again!
Wow, that was amazing. You are a very talented writer. The emotions were so raw; absolutely perfect! Well done! *10*
Author's Response: Really!? Thank you. Very much. *Bows*
Oh my God, rabidfangirl. Amazing. The last line just...wow. See that? That's my heart after being torn out for Remus. Well done. ~Cheers and puppy love :D
Author's Response: Yay, someone from FAP finally cam over and read some of mine! Thank you so much, LilyMichelle. Plug it shamelessly? Please?
*wipes eyes* I like it alot. I can't think of anything else to say but, well, wow!! -Tonx
Author's Response: Whoa, sorry I made you cry! Thank you!
You are an amazing writer, being able to write such a strong (and long) description like that with hardly any spoken words takes talent, normally writers who attempt it lose their audience.
Author's Response: And I didn't lose you? Good! That really is inspiring to hear. Thank you, darling.
I second that. You have a great style of writing, you are very talented! Please countinue. I could really relate to Lupin, poor Lupin. You know you are talnted when your reader can relate, good job again!
Author's Response: You probably know how incredible it feels to be told you're talented. Thank you so much. I try.
I love this story! It's so sad though. *Wipes tears off face* I COMMAND you to keep writing. ~Love ToujoursPur~ Sirius Black ROX!
Author's Response: Hey, so I know that this response is, um, two plus months overdue, only I just figured out how to do this. So, uh, THANK YOU! It really, really means a lot. I think this was my first review on this site. THANK YOU!
