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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/11/17 16:17 · For: Chapter 2
I came back to see Draco and that's what I got so I like the second chapter. There are people in it I know so I'm comfortable. I don't really want to read about Nox very much. I want to understand his/her influence on the story but he/she doesn't have to figure into the conversation too much.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/03/17 13:25 · For: Chapter 1
It got real interesting when Malfoy showed up. Draco has always been one of my favorite characters. This story could be good. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! I hope I can keep your interest piqued.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/03/17 8:20 · For: Chapter 1
Good style and an exciting start.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving feedback; that means a lot to me. I hope the story continues to entertain. Should you have something to criticise in future chapters, please don't hesitate to let me know your opinion!

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