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Reviews For Blood & Chocolate

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/02/17 14:51 · For: Blood & Chocolate
Some people in the medical profession are so impressive. They stand by you no matter what. I always try to go back and tell them how much I appreciate them. This was one of your stories that I felt went by too fast and I couldn't follow, very easily, what was going on. I recognized it right away as one of those stories that you have to put a little more work in on. I like it but it seemed there were some details missing.

Author's Response: This definitely needs work I will clean and tighten that up for the next thing that I write. Thanks for the honesty. I will work on it.

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