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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/01/17 10:03 · For: Chapter 2; A New Friend
As a mom and grandma I could only think, what a mess. Then I decided that was ok because they could clean it up magically. I agree, Darius is a poor, poor boy. Sirius should be able to help him adjust.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/05/17 1:40 · For: Chapter 1; A Sirius Matter
I think they should pick a place to be the birthplace for each of the founders and that will be it. Then they wouldn't have to visit a number of places in an attempt to visit the right place.

Name: PlutoLovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/27/17 22:29 · For: Prologue Part 2
As a Snape fan, I'm intrigued by your initially vague references to him, knowing, of course, that Iris will certainly know his name, and more, before long ... and as a Ravenclaw I enjoyed the Common Room riddle. :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 02/27/17 18:47 · For: Prologue Part 2
I was surprised when Iris went to Ravenclaw. I had to smile at Phoebe handing out the map. When I went to my undergraduate institution for the first time I got terribly lost. I wasn't good at reading maps either. I experienced a lot of panic on my first day there.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 02/27/17 18:34 · For: Prologue Part 1
This is a good start. You've grabbed my interest anyway. At first I thought you meant Lily Potter--then a second later it clicked. You were talking about Lily Potter's grandma. Weird to think of Lily Evans as a grandma. The magical world was robbed.

Name: CallidusSlytherin (Signed) · Date: 02/27/17 3:59 · For: Prologue Part 2
I LOVE IT! How much detail are you going to go into with Lily and the Marauders? (And obviously James and Lily's relationship?)

Author's Response: Hello my friend. I am planning on making Iris and Lily good friends, and Lily will confess her annoyed and, later, confused feelings about James to her. Also they will be together a lot, so every time James asks Lily out, Iris will most likely be there. Thank you for reviewing!

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