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Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/22/17 16:01 · For: Seventeen Days
"But he was running out of time. As an estate lawyer, the last thing he was his possessions contested in probate court. Not that he’d care, really, because he’d be in the ground. He worried about her."

you have repeated this bit and "haven't not"is a double negative. Still a well written end to this character. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for catching that mistake. I was editing and obviously not paying attention because I'm dumb. Glad you liked this.


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