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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/02/17 18:37 · For: Chapter 2 - Aboard the Hogwarts Express
I wouldn't mind going to Scotland but it seems like a chilly place. It seems they have snow almost year round. I'm really liking this story. I can understand a bit of underlying jealousy between Rose and Albus. I'm sure more people want to know about Harry than they do about Ron and Hermione. True, Harry didn't do it all by himself but he was the one who dueled Voldemort in the end and won.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/02/17 17:59 · For: Chapter 1 - Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place
I could imagine their excitement at going to Hogwarts and also the sad feeling that they were entering the next big part of their lives and didn't know what to expect. I was reminded of when my own children headed off to school.

Name: PlutoLovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/27/17 19:27 · For: Chapter 2 - Aboard the Hogwarts Express
I'm continuing to enjoy the unfolding of personalities, both of the canon characters and your new ones. As for Shacklebolt's surprise - that he's soon stepping down perhaps, bringing an interesting new change in Rose's life? Merlin's pants - LOL! Thanks for the kind words about my story in your previous reply!

Name: PlutoLovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/23/17 15:16 · For: Chapter 1 - Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place
I especially enjoyed the use of, and expansions upon, the dialogue from the Epilogue to DH, particularly when her mother tells her to make friends with whomever she wants. Though Slytherin's dark qualities will always make for good storytelling, I always enjoy seeing things moving beyond the "Slytherin vs. everyone else" theme. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I added the second chapter today and have drafted a few more, so hopefully there will be more to read soon. : ) I'm on chapter four of your Rosemary Snape story and loving it. As someone who loves to draw and took cello lessons for a little while, I already love Rosie, and I can't wait to see what happens when she gets to Hogwarts.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/21/17 7:33 · For: Chapter 1 - Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place
Very descriptive writing, but it has taken a whole chapter just to get on the train. How long will it be to get through seven years?

Author's Response: Thanks! This story started as a 50,000 word NaNoWriMo novel, and it's only going to cover Rose's first year at Hogwarts. We'll see if I have ideas for more stories after that... :)

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