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Reviews For Awkward Brother

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/24/17 8:13 · For: Father Figure
Some strange relationships. I got a bit confused at times with the dialogue. When there were three people, it was not always obvious who was speaking to who. Was Agnes adopted by Minerva?

Author's Response: This one was confusing. I should have spent more time cleaning it up. Anytime I try to experiment with dialogue, I screw it up. Yes, Agnes adopted by her. Thanks for the review.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 02/23/17 14:21 · For: Awkward Brother
I agree, everyone should be a little strange. I flaunt my strangeness. I think if Shepherd is a bright child he should probably start with wandless and/or non-verbal spells. They need to have higher expectations for him.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm one of those who thinks it's okay to be strange, too. Here's my thing about the deafness factor. As a person who was born with a physical disability, I believe not everything needs a 'fix' or needs to "be fixed". There were hearing aids in the magical world. Magic, like belief, should not fix everything. There had to be deaf and blind people in JKR's world. Maybe there were not. I see what you're saying, I do, and I took my time thinking about this because often reviewers point out things I missed. If you don't know the basics, which would've been speaking spells. you cannot skip ahead to have a loophole. Remember in Philosopher's Stone when Hermione is practically all about this, that, and the other? The enunciation? A Deaf child would not, perhaps, been given the green light without having started with the building blocks first. The magical world, and I think Rowling says this, do not have a solution for everything. While Shepherd is bright, I don't think he's brilliant - he's just a bright child. Anyway, that was just a thought. Thanks for making me consider this. Thanks for the review.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/18/17 7:37 · For: Awkward Brother
Brilliant and I must admit I would like to know how Shepherd grows up.

Author's Response: Dad I'm sorry that I'm late with the review response. I'm so glad you liked this as a opening chapter. Shepherd was fun to write . Thanks for the review.

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