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Name: tilli (Signed) · Date: 01/03/17 6:03 · For: The Magician's Assistant
Love it. Your characters are so real. You can make us feel the moments that these characters experience perfectly. Congratulations on crossing 100 stories on this forum.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think the counter stopped working, because it should be 109, but as long as I have readers like you who experience the story with the characters, I'll be a happy writer. :)

Name: whichone (Signed) · Date: 12/23/16 11:33 · For: The Magician's Assistant

This is really, really cute. I read it yesterday and then I got distracted and forgot that I didn't leave a review this morning. I love how this is an ordinary thing, that rurngs out not to be an ordinary thing, that goes back to being an ordinary thing. The Lockhart character? Stroke of brilliance there. Oh, and the little boy with portrays Malfoy who needs a punch in the face. The part where I lost it? You already know this. Probably. The assault and battery thing? And then she DEFINES it! Like, slow your roll, little girl. I died. HAHA! Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and for making me laugh by giving me the mental image of young Hermione's expression if you told her to slow her roll. She'd understand after thinking about it, but her initial reaction would be hilarious. :D Thanks again, and I hope you had a very merry Christmas!

Name: WrenWinterSong (Signed) · Date: 12/21/16 17:56 · For: The Magician's Assistant
Ugh, I love Hermione-centric stories, and this one is great. I enjoyed how much like Gilderoy his cousin is, along with the Malfoy-like character. It brought along a familiarity from the books. I also really liked the ending where Hermione knows something weird happened. Funny that Gilderoy's own cousin seems so unskilled with memory charms. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! There's a reason why Gilderoy became rich and famous while his cousin was content to dazzle Muggles at children's parties. Fauntleroy is better at charming women than casting Memory Charms (or being a magician since he cheats by using real magic). :D You bring up an interesting point about stolen memories. I have to think that some of the people Gilderoy took them from became suspicious. Wouldn't a partner, a person saved, a friend, or even villagers down at the pub have brought up what he or she was supposed to have done? Gilderoy was never seen entering or leaving a victim's home? Hermione, while amazing, isn't the only person who can use deductive reasoning. I'd like to think there were Aurors (who look just like David Tennant and Olivia Colman from Broadchurch) investigating such claims, perhaps on the verge of an arrest, when Gilderoy got his comeuppance. Wow. A review that might inspire a story. Thanks for the double Christmas gift! :)

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 12/20/16 15:13 · For: The Magician's Assistant
Made me smile.

Author's Response: That made my Christmas season more merry and bright. Thank you for the gift of a review! :)

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