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Reviews For Illicit Obsessions

Name: whichone (Signed) · Date: 12/25/16 20:15 · For: Chapter 1
Interesting. I have read this three times. I wanted to leave a review, but then I thought this could never happen. Why would this happen? Outside of smut or a poor excuse to make a character connection? And then I kept reading, ignoring my thoughts, and finished the thing. You're kind of brillant. I should have just read it the last time or the first time. They played him. That makes more sense along those lines.

While I do like it, I do have to say one line turned me off reading this a couple times. You can't worry your brain. It's anatomy, dear. You can worry yourself, and you can worry others, but you can't worry an organ. Nope. Not gonna happen. The line doesn't and can't make sense.

The oversll idea of the Malfoys playing this boy? That's a smart, plausible move, though I think Pettigrew would have acted of his own accord and wouldn't have had to have bedn coerced. Sirius said power attracted him; Peter followed the biggest boy on the playground. He made that call.

This was well written. I should have just read the damn thing the first time. Well done.

Jenn


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/24/16 20:08 · For: Chapter 1
I still can't feel bad for Peter, Lucius, or Narcissa. in fact I was disgusted by their activities. The story was well written though. And it was an interesting story in that it explained how Peter turned traitor. That was something I'd never thought of.


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