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Name: Oregonian (Signed) · Date: 01/18/17 14:01 · For: are you lost without me too?
I am so glad that you are updating this story, Wren, and I hope that the next chapters will come quickly. The plot is is certainly intriguing, and your prose is very easy to read, so that re-reading previous chapters to refresh one's memory goes quickly. Good job.
Vicki


Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 01/09/17 11:00 · For: are you lost without me too?
Good writing, but I think the omission of what the murder is or why Scorpius is a suspect feels a little too much like a plot technique.

Author's Response: In the first chapter, I mention that the murder is of Molly Weasley (Jr.) and it happened in Diagon Alley, but any other information would reveal too much for the main story, which is the past. It is a bit of a plot technique, but it's also a necessary one to tell this story so there's meaning when the two timelines meet versus the reader knowing everything that will happen in the past portions because of the present portions. I hope that makes sense. Thanks for reading!


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/21/16 16:29 · For: i want to hear how your heart sings
Love the chapter. So that's what Rose meant when she said she would tell everything. Scorpius was with her. That really shouldn't startle her family if they've been dating for this long. I'm really liking how this story is coming along.


Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 06/20/16 7:11 · For: i want to hear how your heart sings
I like the style, but we have had two chapters of relationship background and I still do not know what has happened. Why is Scorpius in the frame for a murder?


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/19/16 21:05 · For: i wish somehow we could go back to where we came
I love Rose and Scorpius stories. This one is off to a great start. I have high hopes for this story. Hope you update frequently.


Name: Verita Serum (Signed) · Date: 06/19/16 20:41 · For: i want to hear how your heart sings
Oh man, I am so intrigued. Fantastic writing style. Two chapters in and you have such complex, developed characters. I NEED to know more. Cannot wait for your updates!


Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 05/20/16 17:54 · For: i wish somehow we could go back to where we came
Good style. There is a lot missing about what is going on. Waiting for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the encouraging review. I will be uploading the next chapter in hopefully a week or so. Hope that you continue reading as more is revealed as the story goes on.


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