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Reviews For Redemption

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/24/16 18:57 · For: Chapter 2 - Ezekiel
I like the way this is going.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 02/21/16 20:06 · For: Chapter 1 - Zach
I really like this story so far. I'm glad it's more than one chapter. I think Zach is feeling overly guilty about leaving. I have a feeling that no one else thinks about his leaving. He's making himself feel guilty. I think his old friends will be happy to see him again. His parents probably will too. He wasn't required to stay there. The Battle was won without him. No one cares any more. I understand his feelings though. I think we've all felt at one time or another that everyone is watching us and judging us and it's just not happening in reality. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Not altogether unlikely, but here's the question: what would be worse? Having something like this on your conscience and having the chance to redeem yourself? Or finding out that you have no chance at redemption because to everyone but yourself, there's nothing to redeem?

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/21/16 5:46 · For: Chapter 1 - Zach
I can see all sorts of places where this could go. Interesting characters. Good start.

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