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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/10/17 10:33 · For: Chapter 15
If anyone can pull Theophany out of the pit of Dark Magic it would be Severus. I'm sure she's thankful he followed her. The old man was disgustingly arrogant. Did he end up dying? I was so excited by Theophany's trying to get away I didn't know if she reversed her spell. Or I didn't watch for it.

Name: Idaaa (Signed) · Date: 06/27/17 8:25 · For: Chapter 15

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 05/15/17 17:52 · For: Chapter 15
Exciting, all action chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Dad :D

Name: Bluerock (Signed) · Date: 05/13/17 11:58 · For: Chapter 15
Yay for posting! Congrats on graduating! :) I like how this chapter evolved from her not being able to see him and being worried where he was, to her not being able to see at all and him saving her. A definite pattern of rescues and counter rescues developing here, though I do suppose they were desperate times. (it's not a bad thing :) and he did send her after all)

Interesting that legilimency did not really work on her, or did she just happen to be thinking of her family? Or maybe that scary healer just wasn't very good. I have a feeling that someone better at legilimency would have gotten compromising information on the first try, especially if Theophany was not expecting it. There is something unnerving about the way you describe that guys face!
Keep it up! :)))

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