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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/30/16 14:28 · For: Chapter 9
I loved the ending words to this chapter--from "She stepped------Priceless." I must confess I was on the edge of my seat all the way through this chapter. At the end I could only chuckle. I don't know what you plan to do with Theophany and Severus but I hope you let them end up as friends, like maybe sparring friends who always engage each other in a "chess game" of sorts. I might just work on the next Bella Rosa chapter in a bit. I almost feel I've ruined my story by updating so slowly. I would like to finish it this spring and go on to finally work on the other chaptered story I have sitting there. I write for my job and sometimes that takes all the words I have and leaves nothing for fun writing.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 03/30/16 9:55 · For: Chapter 9
Loved the ending.

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