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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/10/15 14:22 · For: Day Two
I wish Sirius had been able to totally kick Wormtail's butt. I know that Peter had to live as a rat for many years but that's not even bad enough considering what he did to the Potter family. If Sirius had been able to kick Peter's butt maybe his time in Azkaban would've made more sense. I really like this story.

Author's Response: So glad you like it, thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/02/15 23:25 · For: Day One
This chapter made me feel very angry at Wormtail all over again. I like what you're doing with this story.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/02/15 15:31 · For: Prologue: Day Five
I would think Sirius would have to at least act crazy if he were in Azkaban. I'd be so angry about Wormtail that I, well, I don't know what I'd do. On to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Name: WrenWinterSong (Signed) · Date: 11/17/15 19:21 · For: Prologue: Day Five
I really enjoyed this opening chapter. I thought it captured Sirius's state of mind perfectly. Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 11/13/15 12:58 · For: Prologue: Day Five
Incoherent, but that is what I would expect from incarceration in Askaban. Good attempt.

Author's Response: It's just the prologue. Future chapters have clearer prose. I'm trying to show how unhinged he is.

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