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Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 01/26/16 9:36 · For: The Moon and the Sea
A really nice story. With just a tinge of sadness at the end, knowing (as we do) what's about to happen next.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 12/22/15 6:39 · For: The Moon and the Sea
Another beautiful story. A very peaceful setting. Almost enough to forget that James and Lily don't get a happy ending. But then - ‘It’s Halloween today.’ So this would be their last day? (Because Harry seems to be a year old). That made it so sad. :(

Author's Response: That's right - I wanted to give them one last beautiful night!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/15/15 17:32 · For: The Moon and the Sea
If it's Halloween, and judging from Harry's behavior he's a little over a year old, was this the night James and Lily were murdered? This isn't important but you wrote that James waved his wand and the tent stuffed itself clumsily into his backpack. Now if he waved his wand to put the tent away why did it clumsily stuff itself into the backpack. If I were putting it away it would be a wound up mess but you would think that if you're using a wand it would be neater about folding itself just so and putting itself away. It's strange what I notice sometimes. I did like this chapter but it was sad realizing that this little family was close to being blown apart.

Author's Response: They left the night before Halloween, when they came back it would be Halloween day and they have only a few hours left. As for the tent thing, I was taking inspiration from OOTP when Tonks does a similar thing packing Harry's trunk; these household spells need practice and a certain knack. Thanks for reading!

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