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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 02/22/16 16:21 · For: Chapter Twenty Three: The Bottle Cap
You just have to love Hagrid. I think he can handle whatever's coming at him. By end of term does he mean spring? They have semesters at Hogwarts don't they? What Hagrid doesn't know is that his party probably won't be happening anyway.

Author's Response: Semesters are called terms here in the UK :) Thanks for your review! :)

Name: SpellWitch (Signed) · Date: 12/22/15 5:11 · For: Chapter Twenty Three: The Bottle Cap
I LOVE what you've written so far! Especially the way you've written Ginny. She's brave, clever, reckless (so Gryffindor-y), but she's also a hot-headed teen, and worried about her family, Harry, Hermione. Ginny's one of my favourite characters and it annoys me when people dismiss her as annoying/selfish/does-not-deserve-her. You've really done a great job of portraying her. Also, her relationships with everyone. From discussing boys with her Mom and Hermione, to trying to gang up with the twins, the way "Loony Lovegood" becomes her closest friend at Hogwarts, and then her growing friendships at school.
I actually keep forgetting that Colin was Ginny's age. Even when I first read the book, I remember I still thought of him as that 11 year old excited kid and that made me even sadder when he died... And of course, you made Colin plan all that with Ginny and the rest... Heart-breaking. I don't remember whether Dennis survived. I'm pretty sure he did. Maybe they could still go out and have that Muggle Day in honour of Colin. :(
(Also, that "think of what Dumbledore would want" and Hagrid saying "yes, he loved parties" was a nice touch. Reminded me of the trio's trips Hagrid's hut.)

Looking forward to the next update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, this is such a lovely review! It really means so much to me! I also still think of Colin as very small, I'm finding him tough to write. So glad you like it!

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