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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/04/15 1:21 · For: Occlumency Experiment
There are a couple of parts in this chapter that I really liked. I liked the thought of Scorpius hiding his box under a pile of snow and Rose conjuring a light breeze to playfully blow away a corner of the snow. I absolutely loved the entire Potter family trooping into thr room where Scorpius was resting and casually sitting on the bed. If that doesn't make Scorpius a part of the family I don't know what does.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked those parts! If Albus hadn't been a threatening gust of wind, I bet the Rose's playful breeze would've been hard to resist. :)

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