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Reviews For The Last Resort

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 08/09/15 15:42 · For: Chapter 4
Another good chapter.

Name: Wenlock (Signed) · Date: 06/28/15 23:01 · For: Chapter 2
Your knowledge of British politics and military adds to the believably of the story. Or maybe its faked knowledge. I don't know enough about either to tell. Either way, you presented it in a believable manner.
Oh wow. This chapter was excellent. I am loving this story!!!
However, speaking as an engineer, your use of megawatts to describe the energy of a projectile is a bit strange. Then again, I'm a girl, and I don't talk guns very often.

Author's Response: I did a fair amount of research, and tried to get things right. If you know anything I got wrong, tell me and I'll fix it (as long as it doesn't screw up the plot). Yes, people confusing energy and power bothers me as well (aerospace engineering major). But power is correct here - that's the amount of kinetic energy applied to what it's hitting per unit time by this gun, based upon energy per slug and the firing rate. This is not a normal unit for guns, I don't think - I'm not a big fan of the things myself. Sometimes I just like to use units in technically correct but unconventional ways, to make people think and because I'm a wiseass.

Name: Wenlock (Signed) · Date: 06/28/15 22:51 · For: Chapter 1
Well this is incredibly unique. Great job coming up with a new angle.
I have a feeling I am going to love seeing the interactions between wizards and muggles.
I like that you already have an obvious conflict. That gets the reader immediately involved. However, just basically saying, "I don't know how the conflict took a bad turn," is a cheap way to do it. You handled it well, though, by having the characters stop eachother from explaining because of the importance of timing.
Overall, well done. I look forward to reading more.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 06/26/15 11:37 · For: Chapter 2
It seems to have lost my review of the first chapter, so I will say again. This is great Gung-Ho boys own stuff!

Author's Response: Thank you.

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