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Name: Shaelynn Malfoy (Signed) · Date: 04/04/17 14:44 · For: Chapter 14 - Reprise
When are you going to continue or be done with this story. I'm not saying it's not good because it is, and that's why I just want to finish reading it.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/08/17 19:07 · For: Chapter 14 - Reprise
Serves Harry right for waiting so long and being so "I don't know what." Why did the Hogwarts students need an art room. Can't they just do some charms and wand waving and things will appear on the paper? Although there is a therapeutic effect of doing art.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 03/08/17 13:54 · For: Chapter 13 - A Visit to Hogsmeade
Since this is a humor fic I wanted to assure you that I am finding it funny. I loved Narcissa's letter to Draco and the comment that it's the weirdos who rise to the top in Muggle government. As always, I enjoy the romance between Minerva and Remus.

Name: RAVENSCORE (Signed) · Date: 05/17/16 21:54 · For: Chapter 12: Interview with a Vampire
ive been waiting for an update forever! This fic is just so funny and ive been feeling like 5th year harry, so this really cheered me up.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm about to post a new chapter now. The site is different though, and it might take me some time to figure out how to post one!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/14/16 14:10 · For: Chapter 12: Interview with a Vampire
Hysterical. These characters are so funny. I think it was probably best to not hire a vampire.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. I think Dumbledore made the right decision too.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 04/14/16 13:55 · For: Chapter 11: Dumbledore Learns Something
I was starting to wonder if you just put down whatever was in your head that is funny. Then I decided that this story was way too clever for you to be doing that. I loved this chapter. Every other sentence made me laugh. I think I liked Severus' account of how Lily was annoying and he was trying to keep her away from him. I think that was the best part.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm sorry I've been away for so long. :/ And I wish I was a brilliant writer who could just write down whatever is in my head and have it be perfect as is, but you are right--I don't do that, lol. There's a lot of writing that didn't make it into the published story. I might add them later as deleted scenes from the cutting room floor.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 01/24/16 17:47 · For: Chapter 10 - Another Martial Arts Lesson
I loved that Draco saved the day with his washing and softening charms. I forgot, is Severus getting all spruced up for Minerva? Funny chapter.Actually, I might have washed clothes on Christmas Day:D

Author's Response: Snape is trying to spruce himself up for Minerva. But I also think he subconsciously wants to fit in and be accepted by the others, even though he may pretend that he feels superior to them. So I think that by changing his appearance, he is signaling that he wants to be part of the group. I think there was a time when Trelawney may have wanted to fit in as well, but she has long since given up.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/28/15 19:44 · For: Chapter 9 - Intermission
Another enjoyable chapter. I loved Narcissa threatening to start her own secret sisterhood club. I also think that men gossip as much as women. I guess Severus was checking McGonagall out if he was feeling slightly jealous of Remus. I hope you let Remus come back to Hogwarts to teach. Their brunch sounded good. I must be hungry:D

Author's Response: Men totally gossip just as much as women, you're right. If anyone is in doubt they can join me and my coworkers at happy hour and they'll find out soon enough, lol. I hope you're also right about Remus coming back to teach at Hogwarts! We shall see...

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 12/07/15 16:29 · For: Chapter 8 - Conversations with Snakes
I enjoyed this chapter. The best part was when Snape told Draco that sometimes two of the heads would bite off the third "critical" head. Its reason being, no one likes a critic. The next best part was the snake telling Harry lies about why it was there---so no one would use it for cloning experiments.

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't take credit for the Runespoor, which is Rowling's creation. (Reference: Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them.) But I can take credit for the snake lying to Harry. :)

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 10/24/15 14:50 · For: Chapter 7 - A Long and Pointless Afternoon
I cannot even type on my phone while on the bus.

Author's Response: I once knew a girl who could apply false eyelashes while riding the bus. I really admire people with that kind of talent.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/24/15 0:29 · For: Chapter 7 - A Long and Pointless Afternoon
I hate it when my phone changes spelling, especially when I don't see it and send the message. My favorite part was when McGonagall thought that Snape was often checking her out. I wish I had that much confidence:D I really envy her relationship with Remus but I think I said that already.

Author's Response: Thank you for being understanding! And I envy her relationship with Remus too. :) Btw, I've been in India for the past 2 weeks doing some site seeing. I will try to update the story by the end of the month!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/25/15 0:58 · For: Chapter 6 - Draco's Story
I'm not sure Hermione was under the influence of the potion. I think she really cares for Draco. I don't care for snakes but Snape's Runespoor sounds kind of cute. He sure seems to care about Avril.

Author's Response: Ah, we shall see about Hermione's feelings for Draco. Your suspicions may be confirmed later on... Yes, Shape truly does care about Avril. I am glad he found a companion, albeit a non-human one. It's good practice for him at least. Hope is not lost for Shape just yet.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/10/15 1:20 · For: Chapter 5 - A Martial Arts Lesson
In responding to one of the comments you made when responding to my review, no, I don't think you made Dumbledore too nuts. Just nuts enough. I've always wondered about Pensieves. If you store your memories there what do you do when you need a certain memory and it's not with you but in storage? Like Dumbledore said, it doesn't do much good there. I love the karaoke bar in Knockturn Alley and the terrorizing noises coming from within. I know what Dumbledore means about not getting much done unless he's by himself in his office. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to update this weekend. Stressful and time consuming family stuff going on lately, unfortunately. But I will do my best to submit the next chapter this weekend!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/08/15 20:26 · For: Chapter 4 - Trelawney's Vision
I'd love to see Snape with his new look. Your Dumbledore is a bit nuts. And, what is he thinking, having everyone learn sign language?

Author's Response: I hope I didn't make him too nuts. But just nutty enough, like chunky peanut butter.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/08/15 20:11 · For: Chapter 3 - Some Enchanted Evening
A very fit Draco in yellow swimming trunks sounds pretty amazing. They all three sounded like they were having some innocent fun. I wonder if Dumbledore would look the other way if he knew Lupin and McGonagall were going to do the same thing.

Author's Response: A very fit Draco in yellow swimming trunks sounds pretty amazing. I'm glad you think so! And yes, I think Dumbledore may have looked the other way too, if he'd known. I wonder if he suspected anything, though... hmmm...

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 08/08/15 18:21 · For: Chapter 4 - Trelawney's Vision
I do not know how I missed this, but it is a good laugh.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/11/15 17:41 · For: Chapter 2 - An Afternoon Romp
That was funny. Just the thought of some of these odd occurrences is funny. I think Lupin and McGonagall are the funniest part.

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought the old pussycat needed to have some fun. ;) And Lupin too. Apparently Rowling agreed with me, since she ended up giving him a love interest later on in the series.

Name: Oregonian (Signed) · Date: 05/06/15 18:47 · For: Chapter 1 - Midnight Madness, and Morning Mayhem
You’re right, Karen! This story really does have a little bit of everything in it. It’s like a total, tongue-in-cheek romp, with absolutely nothing to be taken seriously in it. I can only speculate about what new goofy things will show up in subsequent chapters. Luckily you have chosen the Christmas holidays as your setting, so your cast of characters is limited to a manageable handful.

it’s a fun story to read, as your first story posted in these archives, but I’ll bet you have a serious side also, which we may see in other stories in the future. Nice job.


Author's Response: Thank you for commenting. There will definitely be more fun in store for future chapters! Everything I try to write turns into comedy. Horror, romance, etc... it seems I can't take anything seriously except for comedy. But I do indeed have a serious side, which I hope will become evident by the time my story is completed. :-)

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/05/15 14:58 · For: Chapter 1 - Midnight Madness, and Morning Mayhem
I really liked this first chapter. I especially liked the part when Trelawney was dubbed the Hogwarts Weather Predictor. I love seeing Draco and Hermione together. I look forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad you like it so far! Chapter 2 has been submitted, just have to wait for it to be approved.

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