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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/13/15 2:41 · For: Chapter Five:
It must be so difficult for someone like Hermione to lose her memory. I wonder what I'd think if someone asked if I could do magic. That worked out smoothly--Hermione moving in with Snape. Sometimes I wish I was bold like that.


Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 09/05/15 18:20 · For: Charing Cross, Revisited
This is an intriguing story but I think it is getting due for a resolution.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/05/15 8:04 · For: Charing Cross, Revisited
I hope they each figure out who the other one is. And, I hope they do that soon. I guess they could fall in love with each other and then figure out who the other one is later. I guess that's my long winded way of saying, let's move this along.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 08/10/15 21:33 · For: Chapter 3: The Grangers'
I think the Grangers are being overprotective. Although it sounds like Hermione needs help. I can't wait to hear what Snape thinks about the diary.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/10/15 18:08 · For: Charing Cross
I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait to get to the romance though. I'm wondering how they'll remember who they are and who the other one is.


Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/10/15 17:41 · For: Grimmauld Place
I love Hermione/Snape stories. I feel a bit sad because 6 years seems like a long time to be unaware of your past life and who you are.


Name: Oregonian (Signed) · Date: 05/01/15 23:00 · For: Grimmauld Place
Hi, Wonk. This is Vicki of Slytherin House. I was tickled to see your name, assuming that you were a new author, but now I see that you have been here for a long time. Since the only other story on your author page was dated 2005, I had to read it also to see if your writing had improved over the decade, and yes, it has, although the 2005 story was very enjoyable and I’m glad I read it. So happy to see you back again.

This new story, Of Myth And Magic, is really intriguing and mysterious. All the details you include to describe Hermione’s present state are just perfect. Combined all together, these concrete descriptions of her behavior make a perfect picture of her disordered mental state, without your ever having to resort to general, abstract words. In fact, all the details of the present events are perfect too. I cannot think of anything to criticize.

You start your story off with a bang, In the first paragraph, I wondered if the narrator really was mentally unbalanced, but quickly it becomes clear that all her half-remembered ideas are true, not madness, even though she refers to them as “her delusions”. Someone has messed with her mind, but we don’t know who, or how, or why. And at the end of this short chapter, perhaps a prologue, you give us Severus Snape, similarly affected.

Although not much is happening in this chapter, it is meaty with information we need to know, and unafflicted by extraneous verbiage. The writing is compact and efficient, the way I like it.

I am looking forward to your next chapter. Good job.

Vicki


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