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Reviews For Looking for Lily

Name: GinnyPotterFan26 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/16 7:46 · For: Looking for Lily
I don't know why it took me so long to find this particular tale, but I liked it. I've never thought before about what Severus might have done to protect Lily, after giving Riddle the prophecy.

Author's Response: Thanks, I don't often write Marauders Era stuff, this one was for a challenge on another site. I hope it falls into the cracks in canon, and shows Snape as both protective, and callous. -N-

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 07/24/15 16:33 · For: Looking for Lily
Wow! There's nothing like Severus destroying evidence. I wish we had shredders like that. I can only feel sadness for Mary. I know that Voldemort feared Dumbledore but he never did figure out how intelligent and sly Severus was, did he? Severus' death is probably the one death I would prevent if I could go back and change things in canon. I really liked how you wrote the different characters. Bellatrix is one of my very favorite characters. She was as black as sin but I still liked her. I think she was seriously led astray by other characters and she wasn't strong enough to resist.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Bellatrix was probably always a monomaniac. I'm not certain whether she could have found another "cause". Snape is certainly obsessive, and his obsession is Lily. I tried to show his single-minded defence of her here.

Name: shadowkat678 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/15 20:20 · For: Looking for Lily
It was really good, and I love stories about Lily. Something I noticed, however, was that sometimes you were a bit too descriptive...if that makes since. It interrupted the flow and made some parts jarring. Although, maybe it was just me. I'm not entirely sure...

Author's Response: I often think I write too much dialogue, so in this one I tried to beef up the descriptions. Did I overdo it? -N-

Name: fi103r (Signed) · Date: 03/07/15 14:45 · For: Looking for Lily
Good series of connections. Keep up the good work. Can I put in a request for Aurors snd Schollgirls or Friends and Foes?

Author's Response: Thanks. You can request whatever you like. Work is progressing (very slowly on both of those stories, but I've just uploaded another chapter of "James and Me", and "Strangers" is going well. :-D -N-

Name: desertsol98 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/15 12:55 · For: Looking for Lily
Great job. I really liked it. You keep the characters true to how they are in the books. I can totally see Rowling having Bellatrix and Lucius acting that way. I was nice to see Narcissa be annoyed with her husband.

Author's Response: Thanks, I can really see Lucius and Bella jockeying for position under Voldemort. All marriages have their ups and downs, especially when the kids are little. -N-

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