Reviews For The Other Prophecy
Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/10/14 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 4: St. Mungo's

I am not sure why Hermione had to go into hiding. How does that protect the other Weasleys? It obviously hasn't.

Author's Response: As explained in previous chapters, Hermione knew the kind of danger she would be putting the Weasleys in if she stayed with them. That is why she disappeared for 5 years. She only returned to England to follow a lead she had found. Bellatrix only attacked the Weasleys because she had picked up a trail on Hermione that pointed to them. If she hadn't visited them, they wouldn't have been in any danger and that is why she is so upset with herself. Of course she only visited St. Mungo's because she knew the hospital was heavily guarded. I apologize if this is confusing but all will be explained in later chapters. :)

Reviewer: surbhis
Date: 09/20/14 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 3: Knockturn Alley

AMAAZIng... i am hooked...could you please publish the next chapter!!! Cant wait!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Please recommend it to others. I would love the feedback. =) I will add the next chapter as soon as I can. Right now I'm having technical difficulties with technology but I swear I'm working on it and it will be up as soon as possible. Thanks again for your encouragement! =)

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 07/18/14 9:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Thump in The Night

Ahhh! The suspense is killing me. What is this prophecy! I can't wait for your next chapter. (Which is exactly what should happen with a good story like this. Great job!)

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 07/18/14 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hermione's Message

Well this is the most unique story I've read in a long time, for several reasons: 1. Hermione/Fred is a rarepair. 2. There are quite a few fics out there in which there isn't an immediate happily ever after following the Battle of Hogwarts. Basically none of them have an adventure for Hermione. It's always something that happens to Harry or Ron.
I really liked how original it was. I like being surprised, and you did that here.
It also did a good job of pulling on my emotions. My favorite part was:

“When will she be coming home?” croaked a voice from the corner. Everyone turned to look at Fred who hadn’t spoken a word since dinner.

Hermione was silent. Oh, she wanted to tell Fred that she was home!"

Great job! I will definitely be following this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the reviews. I promise I will update as soon as possible. The idea for this story just kinda sprang itself on me and I had to write it. I love Fremione (though it is not my OTP), and was very sad to find that there were little to no Fremione fics on this site. Which is weird considering it was almost canon.

Reviewer: Wandering Wand
Date: 07/14/14 8:14
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Thump in The Night

Oh no, such an ominous ending to this second chapter! Looking forward to read more, I'm intrigued by your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it and I appreciate the feedback. I honestly didn't even know the second chapter was validated. I never got my confirmation email. :) I'm glad it's up and I'll have Chapter 3 out soon.

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