Reviews For The Other Prophecy
Reviewer: surbhis
Date: 09/20/14 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 3: Knockturn Alley

AMAAZIng... i am hooked...could you please publish the next chapter!!! Cant wait!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Please recommend it to others. I would love the feedback. =) I will add the next chapter as soon as I can. Right now I'm having technical difficulties with technology but I swear I'm working on it and it will be up as soon as possible. Thanks again for your encouragement! =)

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 07/18/14 9:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Thump in The Night

Ahhh! The suspense is killing me. What is this prophecy! I can't wait for your next chapter. (Which is exactly what should happen with a good story like this. Great job!)

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 07/18/14 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hermione's Message

Well this is the most unique story I've read in a long time, for several reasons: 1. Hermione/Fred is a rarepair. 2. There are quite a few fics out there in which there isn't an immediate happily ever after following the Battle of Hogwarts. Basically none of them have an adventure for Hermione. It's always something that happens to Harry or Ron.
I really liked how original it was. I like being surprised, and you did that here.
It also did a good job of pulling on my emotions. My favorite part was:

“When will she be coming home?” croaked a voice from the corner. Everyone turned to look at Fred who hadn’t spoken a word since dinner.

Hermione was silent. Oh, she wanted to tell Fred that she was home!"

Great job! I will definitely be following this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the reviews. I promise I will update as soon as possible. The idea for this story just kinda sprang itself on me and I had to write it. I love Fremione (though it is not my OTP), and was very sad to find that there were little to no Fremione fics on this site. Which is weird considering it was almost canon.

Reviewer: Wandering Wand
Date: 07/14/14 8:14
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Thump in The Night

Oh no, such an ominous ending to this second chapter! Looking forward to read more, I'm intrigued by your story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it and I appreciate the feedback. I honestly didn't even know the second chapter was validated. I never got my confirmation email. :) I'm glad it's up and I'll have Chapter 3 out soon.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Chocolate Frog by L A Moody 3rd-5th Years
Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing...
I Suspect Nargles by foolondahill17 3rd-5th Years
“No one’s ever kissed me before…. What is one to do now?” An extensive...
The Life and Times of Linnea Potter by Cantatrix 1st-2nd Years
Linnea Potter has lived under the tyranny of her relatives for the better part...
FEATURED
Glass over the Flame by the opaleye 3rd-5th Years
Harry, Hermione, and the moments in between. He doesn’t say that this...
Tom Riddle and the Chamber of Secrets by CanisMajor 3rd-5th Years
What really happened the last time someone let the Basilisk out? Harry Potter...
Red Squirrel/Sun Rises by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
+ He wouldn't celebrate his birthday, but his son had other ideas. + This was...
Sybill Trelawney and the Unexpected Gift by Squibstress 3rd-5th Years
Sybill Trelawney learns to live with her Inner Eye, cooking sherry, and Minerva...
Pat-a-Cake by foolondahill17 1st-2nd Years
Molly Weasley II, called Pat, and twenty-one lot and little-known facts. Or...
Wood by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
Marcus Flint, the infamous Super Seventh Captain of the Slytherin Quidditch...
CATEGORIES