Reviews For broken brights
Reviewer: WolfsBane Geek
Date: 10/26/14 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it

Reviewer: 1000timesingoldenink
Date: 08/24/14 23:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh, oh it's beautiful...

This really touched me. Not as fanfiction, just, personally, because I've been long distance for a year and all of this (except I guess the middle stanza, since it seems more related to H/G or some specific couple) describes so perfectly what I wish I could put into words...

The capitalization and spacing feel just right for it, too, because missing someone you love, someone far away, is not a sentiment for capital letters--a whisper, a slow song, not a yell. And because we never capitalize in skype messages, and we hit enter between long enough phrases, so sentences arrive in fragments.

Anyway, thank you...sorry all this isn't very coherent, but this poem belongs to me, or I belong to it, or I should really go to sleep or something.

Jenny

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