Reviews For Lily and Alice
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/17/14 11:23
Chapter: Chapter 3 The Order

I liked the addition of the whoopee cushions. Yes, I'm a grown woman who laughs hysterically at any mention of flatulence. :D The thought of Moody and a female is pretty funny. I always took him for someone who didn't really care about the opposite sex, or the same sex either. When you mentioned Lily using data to predict future Death Eater activities I had visions of her running regression equations. I've always thought Arithmancy was kind of an upper level math class.

Author's Response: As a fellow grown woman who laughs at flatulence, I appreciate your review. =) Yeah, we'll see if I end up doing anything Moody/Dorcas. It might not work its way into this story, but it could be a fun one-shot or short story later. I got the prediction idea from a TV show from a few years ago called Numb3rs, which I absolutely love. I thought the same about Arithmancy. In real life, I'm an engineering student, so I felt the most connection Arithmancy out of all the fields of study in JKR's wizarding world. (Hence my penname - Bridget Wenlock was a Wizard of the Month famous for Arithmancy.)

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 06/16/14 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 3 The Order

Great story, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your encouragement.

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 05/04/14 11:39
Chapter: Chapter 2 A Celebration and A Contest

It is a good start but I think u should speed it up a bit .

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I hope I can keep a good balance between not going too fast and not getting boring.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/04/14 1:23
Chapter: Chapter 2 A Celebration and A Contest

It's probably a good thing Moody left since I'm sure he's done so many things. I'm curious how Alice knows one of the Lestrange boys. Did she arrest him once? He seemed kind of familiar though like he knew her from somewhere. I'm liking your writing style.

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for all your reviews. I am really appreciating your feedback. =) I hadn't thought of that. Moody left because he had Order business, but you're right. He definitely would have won if he had stayed. She knows Rabastan Lestrange (not Bellatrix's husband, but his brother) quite well. They went to Hogwarts together, and, as she said, he's the reason she became an Auror. He also had a huge impact on Alice's relationship with her mother. I don't want to give too much away though. =)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/03/14 23:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Published

It sounds like Lily is doing very well for herself. She sounds like a typical grad student.

Author's Response: Good. That's what I was going for. I've always seen Lily getting more education after Hogwarts.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/02/14 19:18
Chapter: Prologue: November 2, 1981

Wow! This is a very powerful first chapter. It was short but said a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked. To be honest, I was kind of nervous submitting it. This is my first story.

Reviewer: Ethan_May
Date: 04/19/14 3:48
Chapter: Prologue: November 2, 1981

Very interesting idea. I'm excited to see where the story progresses!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm having a lot of fun with it so far.

Reviewer: Ethan_May
Date: 04/19/14 3:47
Chapter: Prologue: November 2, 1981

Very interesting idea. I'm excited to see where the story progresses!

Reviewer: Ethan_May
Date: 04/19/14 3:45
Chapter: Prologue: November 2, 1981

Very interesting idea. I'm excited to see where the story progresses!

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