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Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 04/18/14 20:01 · For: Chapter 3
No offence, but that is not a cliff hanger. Unless Ginny is going to refuse. Now that would be an interesting story!

Author's Response: Oooh! Idea!!!! I mean, we know she marries him eventually, and it has to be by a certain point for young James to be the age he is in the Epilogue, but... hmmm... maybe the timing isn't what I imagined... Thanks for the idea!

Name: Wenlock (Signed) · Date: 04/17/14 12:41 · For: Chapter 3
Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! =)

Yet again, well written and enjoyable to read.

Name: baby54boomer (Signed) · Date: 04/12/14 23:08 · For: Chapter 2
Great job...keep going!!!!!

Name: baby54boomer (Signed) · Date: 04/08/14 17:14 · For: Chapter 1
A very nicely crafted introductory chapter. You present the reader with a bit of mystery: WHY did Harry buy the Muggle house? WHAT is the significance of waiting the 4 !/2 years and WHERE had Harry been living in the interim? Will the story reveal the reasons for Harry's avoidance of #12 Grimmauld Place? Is the interaction between House Elf and Master become the foundation for the rest of the story?
I look forward to reading your installments. Good luck!

Name: sam1 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/14 14:18 · For: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot hope u update soon it has been a while without good stories on fanfiction it is exciting .

Name: foolondahill17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/14 13:25 · For: Chapter 1
Aw, I really like this. A clever idea and well-written.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 04/06/14 12:51 · For: Chapter 1
Nice setting.

Name: Wenlock (Signed) · Date: 04/06/14 11:14 · For: Chapter 1
This chapter just made me smile a lot =)
Good characterization and a good way to introduce the idea that Harry will be proposing to Ginny without too much fluff. Keep this up =)

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