Reviewer: Dad
Date: 04/18/14 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 3

No offence, but that is not a cliff hanger. Unless Ginny is going to refuse. Now that would be an interesting story!

Author's Response: Oooh! Idea!!!! I mean, we know she marries him eventually, and it has to be by a certain point for young James to be the age he is in the Epilogue, but... hmmm... maybe the timing isn't what I imagined... Thanks for the idea!

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 04/17/14 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 3

Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! =)

Yet again, well written and enjoyable to read.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/12/14 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 2

Great job...keep going!!!!!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/08/14 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

A very nicely crafted introductory chapter. You present the reader with a bit of mystery: WHY did Harry buy the Muggle house? WHAT is the significance of waiting the 4 !/2 years and WHERE had Harry been living in the interim? Will the story reveal the reasons for Harry's avoidance of #12 Grimmauld Place? Is the interaction between House Elf and Master become the foundation for the rest of the story?
I look forward to reading your installments. Good luck!

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 04/06/14 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like this story a lot hope u update soon it has been a while without good stories on fanfiction it is exciting .

Reviewer: foolondahill17
Date: 04/06/14 13:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, I really like this. A clever idea and well-written.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 04/06/14 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice setting.

Reviewer: Wenlock
Date: 04/06/14 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

This chapter just made me smile a lot =)
Good characterization and a good way to introduce the idea that Harry will be proposing to Ginny without too much fluff. Keep this up =)

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