Bloody fantastic. The entire time I was reading this, I could feel the tensions and emotions running through Minerva and Severus. I particulary likes the Occlumency scene at the end. I felt the story tie together in a rather twisted and raw end. Minerva's wary and somewhat distant personality is explained so well. You kept Minerva compatible with her canon characterisation. Very well written. I hope to read more from you soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to explore the Occlumency thing, as it's always creeped me out. I've written quite a bit about Minerva and Severus, but some of it isn't suitable for MuggleNet--I'm slowly adding the ones that are.