Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 10/20/13 15:27
Chapter: Chapter 2

Fabulous! I love the tension between the main characters. Thanks for the rapid update. What a treat to get another chapter so quickly! I look forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to update soon - hopefully within the next week!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 10/20/13 0:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

So glad to see a new story from you! Excellent writing, draws the reader in. I'm interested in finding out who the first two characters are... I have a few theories, but it's very early... Need more details... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's definitely a little early for theories and hints, but I think the identities of Squid and Ape will become clearer as the story progresses. And I'm very glad I still have a few readers lurking about! Thank you for sticking around and taking a chance on this story. The second chapter should be up now. I hope you enjoy it!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/15/13 6:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Strong writing but this is classified as Hermione/Draco so I have still to work out who the two characters are. I hope the plot becomes a bit clearer in the next chapter.

Author's Response: You could consider this chapter a prologue, of sorts. Don't worry - the Dramione action ramps up in the next chapter, as does the plot. Thanks for sticking with me! I look forward to reading your reviews!! :)

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