Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 04/05/14 2:23
Chapter: Chapter 15

Beautiful end to a compelling story! Thank you for the journey, I really enjoyed that one. I hope to see more from you in the future!!

Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such great reviews on every chapter! I seem to have lost a bit of traction on this site as far as readers go, and I'm really happy that there are still people out there willing to give me a chance. :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 04/02/14 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 15

I enjoyed that very much. Excellent writing.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Lucius_Vorenus
Date: 03/31/14 7:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very well written story.
This has been a great read.
Glad you've finished your story, as many great starts of stories never reach the finish.

Thank you very much!

With the HP fanfiction sort of fading out, stories like these keep the flame of Potterverse alive.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/30/14 16:11
Chapter: Chapter 15

I can't believe it is the end...what a great fic! Truly wishing for an epilogue but it was a sweet end none the less. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 03/20/14 0:55
Chapter: Chapter 14

Bravo! I guessed correctly about "Ape's" true identity and I even had a sneaking suspicion that "Squid" was a Creevey. I kept second guessing myself on the latter because your character is SO un-Creevey in nature, but I really like how you show what anger and bitterness and a thirst for revenge can do to someone. Now to help Hermione stop the bad guys and finally let the romance happen!!

Author's Response: I figured people would catch on to Ape's true identity pretty easily, and I'm glad I kept you guessing with Squid's. Another reader pointed out that George Weasley could've gone much the same way after Fred's death, and I agree: the loss of a loved one changes you, sometimes for better, sometimes for worse. Colin's death hit Dennis hard and, well... You see the results. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 02/28/14 18:29
Chapter: Chapter 13

Yea! I was so excited to see this chapter posted. Excellent re-entry of our "pal" Squid. Goodness, that Baker certainly was a good example of arrogance and stupidity. Looks like some action is up next... Can't wait!

Author's Response: Oh yes, action is imminent! It'll be a bit longer than a week before I post again (I'm going out of the country and won't have computer access), but once I'm back, this story should be wrapped up before the end of March. :) Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!!

Reviewer: Carvalho
Date: 02/06/14 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

This made me smile. Thank you.

Author's Response: And it's not done yet! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 01/22/14 0:25
Chapter: Chapter 11

Interesting segway... I wonder what will happen when Hermone returns? And Squid will certainly find out (if he doesn't already know) that Draco has returned home. It seems a turning point... Thanks for the speedy update!! As always, can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know when I'll update next - maybe a week? A week and a half? I'm not going to give anything away re: Squid, but I will agree that their homecoming was definitely a turning point. ;)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 01/16/14 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 10

I was thinking the squid had been lost from this story. Now he is back in play and I still do not know who on the dark side hates Draco so much.

Author's Response: Nope, Squid is definitely not gone. It's fine with me that you're still in the dark regarding his identity; I mean for it to be secret until I intend to reveal it. ;) Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 01/15/14 23:26
Chapter: Chapter 10

Yea! Another chapter! So now the action is heating up and Squid is making his play... The story is getting very exciting and you are very talented with cliff hangers...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still enjoying this!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 01/06/14 1:16
Chapter: Chapter 9

Best chapter yet! Thanks for the update! I have always thought that if the trio ever trained to be Aurors together, Hermione might not quite take to it in the same way as the boys. I thought you wrote that brilliantly! And the relationship is going somewhere... As always, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, I thought this one would go over well, and it seems I'm right! I'm glad you liked it, and that my assessment of Hermione's Auror abilities seemed accurate. It's so tempting to write her as a battle goddess, and there's no doubt that she is highly capable, but Harry and Ron trust their instincts, and I feel that is where she would fall behind. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 12/07/13 20:05
Chapter: Chapter 8

Yea, an update! You are a master at building the tension. Too bad the little grass fight was interrupted... Send the next chapter soon!!

Author's Response: Woo! Thank you! Yes, Estelle has terrible timing, doesn't she? Who knows what would have happened had they been allowed to continue their horseplay? ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing! You're spoiling me, leaving them on every chapter. It's great! :D

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 12/03/13 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 7

And the relationship turns... Thanks for the holiday treat!! Hope yours was lovely as well!

Author's Response: Yes, my holiday was great, but I'm excited to get back to posting again! I hope to have another chapter up by the end of this week. :)

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 12/03/13 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 7

please add the new chapter soon! really enjoying this

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! I hope to get a new chapter out by the end of this week. Fingers crossed!

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 11/16/13 2:14
Chapter: Chapter 6

Lovely chapter! Can't wait for the next...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to get it posted this week. :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/13/13 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 5

Still not worked out who Squib and Ape are. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: That's just fine with me. I'd like their identities to remain a mystery until I choose to reveal it. ;)

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 11/11/13 11:41
Chapter: Chapter 5

really enjoying this story, please update again soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update soon. :)

Reviewer: Chelle74
Date: 10/31/13 22:38
Chapter: Chapter 4

I am continuing to enjoy your story and the build up of the main characters' relationship. Keep the updates coming! Thanks for not making us wait long!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the progression! I'll try not too make you wait too long, but I can't make any promises with the holidays coming up. ;)

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 10/27/13 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 3

i have really enjoyed your stories and i'm really enjoying this fic. it's actually really similar to an older story which has never been completed, so i'm really looking forward to what will happen! please could you update the story asap please? thanks

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope my story isn't *too* similar to the one you're thinking of. I'd hate for there to be any questions or mentions of that dreaded "P" word. Do you remember the title of the other one, by any chance? And I'll try to update soon. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/23/13 12:01
Chapter: Chapter 2

Snappy dialogue.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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