Reviewer: FeatherNiffler
Date: 02/03/14 14:03
Chapter: Chapter 3

Please update :) I'm going through withdrawals!!!

Reviewer: FeatherNiffler
Date: 02/01/14 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG THIS IS FABULOUS! I haven't come across a fanfiction this well written and just plain good in a long time. (I might be a bit prejudiced, though, because I share your views on Snape), but I'm only on the first chapter and am in in love with it. :) good work

Reviewer: BlueWater5
Date: 01/04/14 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 3

Loved the interrogation scene! I hope you plan to update regularly.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 11/24/13 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 3

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 11/22/13 16:17
Chapter: Chapter 3

Snape and Malfoy seem to have taken over this investigation from Harry.

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/17/13 7:06
Chapter: Chapter 2

I cannot believe a major piece of evidence is allowed to go missing without there being serious repercussions.

Author's Response: You are a very perceptive reader - Cho's negligence will not be forgotten; it will be addressed in Chapter 4. I hope that you are enjoying the story! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 10/16/13 21:46
Chapter: Chapter 2

Snape, Snape, Severus Snape... :) I loved everything about him in this chapter! And the restraint that Harry had- wow! I guess those self-help books help, huh?
Favorite part: Snape asking Shaklebolt who the aurors were. *snickers*
Can't wait to read more. You know how to make me laugh and you know how to hook me in.

Author's Response: I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! :) Like you, I also favor the scene when Snape demands to know who the Aurors are - I just couldn't resist the temptation to force Severus and Lucius to work with Harry and Ron. More of their adventures are on the way (the next chapter should be posted within the next couple of days) and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. Thank you for letting me know that you laughing and enjoying the tale - your reviews always make my day! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 10/16/13 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 2

Great chapter - I can't wait to read more! I find your characterisation of Snape interesting (compared to his role in your 'Accidental series), e.g. when he beats Lucius up in Azkaban. More of a tough guy I guess :) Your interpretation of Lucius in this fic reminds me a little of Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, but I don't know if that's just because I've been watching a lot of it recently...

As I said, awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next!
DFTBA,
Georgie

Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! :) I enjoyed hearing your thoughts about Snape being a "tough guy" - I've always seen him as the type of person who would do whatever he had to to accomplish what needed to be done; having grown up with a violent Muggle father, I don't think it is unreasonable to assume that he knows how to defend himself without the use of magic. As to Lucius, you will be seeing more of him in the next chapter, which should be posted within the next couple of days. Thanks for reading and sending me your thoughts! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 10/14/13 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so so so so so excited! One, Snape and Lucius have that same feel to them as they did in your other series, so it was easy to automatically connect with them. And two, I love that joke about Severus' freedom. :) I cannot wait to see the banter between Potter and these two, because I have always enjoyed how you write out their arguments. And I love Lucius teasing Severus about women. Eep!
Can you tell how excited I am?????
Looking forward to the next chapter...

Author's Response: Hello again! It is so fantastic to see that you have given my new story a try! :) I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the first chapter. Like you, I also adore the interactions between Lucius and Severus; that is one of the top reasons why I decided to write this story. Thank you for the lovely compliments about enjoying the banter between our favorite Slytherins - I worked really hard on trying to make their conversations believable and fun. I truly hope that you like the next chapter, which has just been posted. Happy Reading! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Oregonian
Date: 10/04/13 1:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story has a sparkle to it with its lively dialogue, refreshingly original premise, colorful details, and good characterization of the two unfortunate prisoners. Their distinct personalities show up very well. Although this first chapter is mostly dialogue, there is enough action to keep the pace going well, and nothing seems superfluous; the characters are not saying the same things over and over. And I appreciate the undercurrent of humor that comes close to the surface from time to time.

I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

Vicki

Author's Response: Dear Vicki ~ Thank you so much for your sweet and complimentary review! :) I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed the first chapter. The next chapter, which should be approved and posted within the next couple of days, will see Lucius, Snape, and the two Aurors (any predictions?) begin their joint investigation into the murders. I really appreciate your enthusiasm for the story! :) Happy Reading! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/03/13 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am not quite sure why Snape is actually a prisoner. I bet Harry and Ron are not the Aurors.

Author's Response: Hello again! It is terrific to hear from you again! :) Both of your comments will be answered in the next chapter, which should be approved and posted within the next couple of days. Thank you for giving my new story a try! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 10/03/13 4:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely story as all your lovely stories. I always liked Severus but u made me love him like albus thank you very much . I have been waiting for a while for this new fabulous story . Best regards sam1

Author's Response: Please read my response to your previous review, which is identical to this one. :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 10/03/13 4:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely story as all your lovely stories. I always liked Severus but u made me love him like albus thank you very much . I have been waiting for a while for this new fabulous story . Best regards sam1

Author's Response: Hello again! It is wonderful to hear from you again! :) Thank you so much for your sweet review - I'm happy to know that you are still reading and enjoying my stories. I hope that you like the upcoming chapter, which should be posted in the next couple of days! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 10/01/13 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

The story set-up is good; quite satisfying, actually. Thank you for using the crisp dialogue and concise adjectives to keep the action moving. I don't know how many chapters you're planning to write, but I hope they are similarly filled with information and description.
Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you for your many sweet compliments! :) I am thrilled to hear that you are enjoying the story so far. As of today, I am planning on having about seven long chapters for this story, but the final count just might end up being more than that estimate because I tend to be wordy! As I write and edit the upcoming chapters, I will definitely keep your suggestion - having lots of descriptions - in mind. Thanks for giving my story a try! :) Happy Reading! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 10/01/13 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you are enjoying the story so far! :) Happy Reading! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 10/01/13 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love this! I don't read too much AU, but it seems that Snape's survival is just too good not to read! Great fic, I can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your very sweet review! :) I'm glad to hear that you gave the story a try; hopefully, you will enjoy the upcoming chapters. I agree with you 100% about Snape's survival being "too good" to pass up. Happy Reading! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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