I already like this... I hope (really hope, not that I'm telling you how to write your fanfic) that they don't just become bffs over night... But I like the route you're going with this. Please update soon!!
I really like where you're going with this fic - I love the James/Lily dynamic and like Lily's internal monologue. But I just wanted to ask if you have a beta for your fic? It's just that I noticed you called Alice "Alice Longbottom" in one section and thought that if you want a beta for future chapters then I'd love to help :)