Reviews For The Last Year
Reviewer: Potter Penguin
Date: 10/29/13 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

I already like this... I hope (really hope, not that I'm telling you how to write your fanfic) that they don't just become bffs over night... But I like the route you're going with this. Please update soon!!
-Penguin

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 10/06/13 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like where you're going with this fic - I love the James/Lily dynamic and like Lily's internal monologue. But I just wanted to ask if you have a beta for your fic? It's just that I noticed you called Alice "Alice Longbottom" in one section and thought that if you want a beta for future chapters then I'd love to help :)
--
Georgie

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