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Name: Kerowyn6 (Signed) · Date: 12/30/13 16:09 · For: Chapter 2: The Magical World
I like this a lot! It's nice that you made Tatiana black, that's something that irked me about HP: no black characters.

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 11/12/13 13:52 · For: Chapter 2: The Magical World
It is too much like the original plot. Try to get some more varied stuff in here. Well written,

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter is probably the last that will closely resemble the original plot, and after that the story will go in a different direction. In general, I'm keeping these things the same: the whole Horcruxes thing, and the leaving school to go hunt Horcruxes in year seven. Otherwise, I'll be sure to change it up!

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