Reviews For Final Chances
Reviewer: J-Holly
Date: 12/12/13 7:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

Wow, it was fun! As you said, it wasn't exactly perfect. I could see parts that weren't smooth enough. But despite that, I really like the way you described Draco and his feelings. Hermione's feelings, too. And McGonagall giving Draco the Head Boy badge, that was something she definitely would have done. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter. I expect Hermione and Draco will feel attracted to each other soon, and that would be something I would really enjoy seeing :)
P.S. I'm sorry if this review sounded arrogant or anything.. I'm not that good at English and I always feel awkward writing reviews

Author's Response: Oh, no! Your review was wonderful! I really appreciate the feedback. I know it's not perfect but that's okay. Nothing is ever perfect. I keep meaning to post the next chapter but I just don't have the time.

Reviewer: fatimaahb
Date: 09/18/13 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

I want moreee! I loved this cause its everything I expected Draco to feel after the battle, cant wait for more! please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate your feedback. I know you never hear about how Draco really felt. I'll have so more soon. I work 2 jobs so it takes me a little while to update.

Reviewer: fatimaahb
Date: 09/18/13 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

I want moreee! I loved this cause its everything I expected Draco to feel after the battle, cant wait for more! please update soon!

Reviewer: ravenfaire
Date: 08/30/13 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

You're off to a good start. I have high hopes for this one. I have been a fan of Draco's redemption since reading the last Harry Potter book. It will be interesting to read how your vision unfolds. Best of luck!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. It's nice to get feedback. Especially when, so far, it's all so positive!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/30/13 7:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

Interesting situation.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have more chapters out soon.

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 08/30/13 4:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Starting Over

I wrote my first a few months ago, so well done on yours :) Love the characterisation, and if anything I'd love it to be longer! Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am most definitely not finished with it. I plan on a nice long story with a decent plot. I feel like it's hard to find those sometimes so I'm trying my best with my own story. I promise to update as soon as I can. I work 2 jos morning to night so it might take me a little while. Thank again!

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